Yes, I remember you commenting in that thread. I appreciate the input.
Any edit of Hell Rider probably won't be for a while, so for now enjoy what I put out (my "first edition" you could say).
I asked Lynxara to read it over a few years ago and she said that the script-format made it a bit clunky to get through. I was used to writing that way for an RPG series I had participated in, but for my other fics I used the typical "novel" format.