What chapter is that? I don't even remember anymore. But I'm very glad you're enjoying it. Once I finish GAIEA and Dinoman I think I will repost it on HJU and clean it up a bit. As for non fan-related stuff, do you mean a non-toku story? I haven't actually. Not much comes to mind right now.
By the way, do you use AIM or MSN? Perhaps we could have easier conversations there.
Yes, I remember you commenting in that thread. I appreciate the input.
Any edit of Hell Rider probably won't be for a while, so for now enjoy what I put out (my "first edition" you could say).
I asked Lynxara to read it over a few years ago and she said that the script-format made it a bit clunky to get through. I was used to writing that way for an RPG series I had participated in, but for my other fics I used the typical "novel" format.
Thanks, it was my first attempt at fanfiction. I hope you enjoy it. I still have intentions to release an second edit of it (Nothing too drastic, just a few small changes in dialogue, music and the way Ben and Kenta met. And restructure the writing in a non-script format and more like my other fics.)
Check out my three Sentai fics as well if you're interested. I just released Ch. 12 of Dinoman and am working on Ch. 12 of GAIEA.