Rewrite A Series

[Sentaifan'07 Xman]

If I rewrote Fourze... I'd make it like Gokaiger. I'll set it up in a sort of timeline going from when the story would begin in universe, to when it would end, broken down into points.

• The story begins with a retelling of Let's Go Kamen Rider, where it asks "What if the All Rider Break costed the riders their powers?"
• A bunch of scientists (The OSTO) find out a massive surge of energy trapped near one of the moons of Jupiter, and make Switches out of them. However, they realized that they couldn't unlock all the energy, especially since a booming voice says they've been deemed unworthy.
• Then, one of the scientists decides to betray every member of OSTO in order to take in the energy for himself after hearing how one of them was planning on sharing the Cosmic Energy with everyone on earth. He kills everyone one by one, but one of the scientists manages to escape in a Lunar Lander, leaving the murderer for dead... Or so it seemed. The Scientist set up a base on the moon and placed the Switches there, preparing the Lander for when a new generation of children would discover it. One of those children being his son.
• Then it proceeds like normal Fourze for a short while. Mainly the Orion arc stays the same, though things slowly change. By the end of the second episode, a man passes by the school, carrying with him a stick holding his underwear for tomorrow.
• From there, the format changes. Gentaro still makes his friends as usual, just that now the enemies have changed. Instead of the Chameleon Zodiarts, it's now the Chameleon Orphnoch... Or something like that. Basically, the monsters Gentaro faces are now original Kaijin based off the Kaijin from the previous Kamen Riders, much like what happens with Decade.
• Gentaro still unlocks his switches as usual, but he also unlocks the Legend Rider Switches each time he gains the approval by the riders before him. And sometimes they're required to unlock the States, such as Blade unlocking Elec, Ryuki unlocking Fire, Double unlocking Magnet, and Decade unlocking Cosmic.
• Meteor is changed a bit. The Meteor Galaxy has changed to have instead the Shin Lever, the ZO Lever, and the J Lever. Pretty much filling the niche for the Movie Riders. Meteor Storm is still unlocked as usual, but through the approval of a certain second Rider from the past.
• The Horoscopes are the ones who changed the most. They're the scientists who died on the moon, including the murderer, all revived by the Cosmic Energy and given the powers of riders from the past. So Scorpio Zodiarts is now Sasword, Leo is now OOO Ratoratah Form, and pretty much every Zodiart is a Kamen Rider that matches their motif. Sagittarius is now Kuuga Ultimate.

And yeah... I don't know a lot, but that's the ideas I have in a nutshell.

Well, for half of the Horoscope Zodiarts should be at least half of the murdered astronauts and the other riders that were turned Zodiarts should be silhouettes.

 

[Artic_Rival]

Hm... Good idea.

 

[Kamen Rider Cherry]

Movie Wars Megamax (this is gonna be long and very fanficcy so please take it easy on me):
[HIDE]First and foremost, Double doesn't appear. While Shotaro makes a quick voice cameo, he and Phillip are never actually onscreen. Instead, their part is filled by the five protagonists from Smile Pretty Cure, with Yayoi/Cure Peace having the most focus.

The third part of the movie starts with Yayoi arriving in Fuuto through the Mysterious Library after hearing about the meteor and Foundation X's plans. Being the tokusatsu fanatic she is, she doesn't hesitate looking for them, but they are the ones that find her. After thinking about what Shotaro would do in her position, Yayoi transforms into Cure Peace and fights the Kamakiri and Kabuto Yummies, but much like in canon her interference (and clumsiness) causes the SOLU sample to leak away, and Yayoi, noticing this, heads to the Narumi Detective Agency to tell Shotaro and Phillip about this, despite having never really met them.

During the Fourze part, right after the brief "love at first sight" moment between Gentaro and Nadeshiko, we go back to Fuuto, where Miyuki, Akane, Nao, Reika and Candy are looking for Yayoi until they find her shedding tears while facing the entrance of the Narumi Detective Agency; it turns out that Shotaro and Phillip aren't around, as Akiko took them with her on a trip to Osaka, which is pointed out by a note pinned to the door. Akane quickly recognizes the name "Narumi Akiko" and reveals that she and Akiko are close friends, and she has kept Akiko's cellphone number. This info comes in handy for Yayoi, who uses the phone number to contact Shotaro about the whole thing involving Foundation X, and Shotaro advises her to go after it herself. After that, we cut to the scene with the KRC and Nadeshiko in the infirmary, continuing her storyline from where it stopped.

The final part begins with Eiji and Gentaro meeting up with the Smile Cures, with Yayoi having a brief fangasm and hitting it off with Gentaro (in a much friendlier way than the Shotaro/Gentaro scene in canon) before telling them what she knows about Foundation X. After that, the scene goes like the canon version, but with the Smile Cures replacing Double, until a certain point where Fourze finds the Rider-themed items, which, in this version, are not Medals and Switches but rather special Cure Décors, which, when used by the Cures, allow the spirits of the Seven Legendary Riders to possess them and fight in their bodies.

Finally, during the epilogue, instead of the scene with Gentaro and the real Nadeshiko, we get a scene involving Gentaro and the Smile Cures placing the Rider Décors in the Décor Décolle, which causes the Seven Legendary Riders to be restored to their original forms. After a brief conversation between Cures and Riders, an overly-excited Yayoi asks the Seven Legendary Riders to sign a blank page of her sketchbook, which they do, causing Yayoi to faint only to be caught by Gentaro in a similar way to how he caught Nadeshiko earlier.[/HIDE]

 

[shingamyeonblack]

Uh, that's a fanfic all right. A strange one at that with the mixing of 2D and 3D characters.

 

[Cyberslayer]

After just finishing Agito....just delete it, that counts a rewrite. Never air it and just have re-runs of Kuuga.

 

[GoseiGold]

After just finishing Agito....just delete it, that counts a rewrite. Never air it and just have re-runs of Kuuga.

Care to explain Cyberslayer?

 

[Cyberslayer]

Care to explain Cyberslayer?

I went into Agito expected some epic show that everyone talks highly about but I just never understood what was going on for the first 30 episodes, Souichi gets his memories back for 1 episode only to lose them again and make that episode pointless. Another Agito came out of no where, I was expecting him to be another character that was around for a while but nope, it was just some teacher we never met before. Gills and G3 were meaningless. Hojo was a bland proto-Kageyama who's only reason for being there was to mindlessly say "let's catch Agito" over and over....and to use G3 for an episode but to muck it up instantly. The exact same battle theme played every fight that every character was in (even the very last fight) and it got old real fast. Every time Agito got a new form it was downplayed so much that its like even the show didn't care he got a new form. Gills entire purpose was just to get killed over and over (You killed Gills again, you bastards!). The family that Souichi stayed with weren't interesting, especially Mana....Miss. Dues Ex.

 

[GoseiGold]

I went into Agito expected some epic show that everyone talks highly about but I just never understood what was going on for the first 30 episodes, Souichi gets his memories back for 1 episode only to lose them again and make that episode pointless. Another Agito came out of no where, I was expecting him to be another character that was around for a while but nope, it was just some teacher we never met before. Gills and G3 were meaningless. Hojo was a bland proto-Kageyama who's only reason for being there was to mindlessly say "let's catch Agito" over and over....and to use G3 for an episode but to muck it up instantly. The exact same battle theme played every fight that every character was in (even the very last fight) and it got old real fast. Every time Agito got a new form it was downplayed so much that its like even the show didn't care he got a new form. Gills entire purpose was just to get killed over and over (You killed Gills again, you bastards!). The family that Souichi stayed with weren't interesting, especially Mana....Miss. Dues Ex.

I kinda liked Agito myself, but we're all entitled to our opinions.

But you are right about Shouichi getting his memories back for only one episode that was a load of bullcrap.

 

[Cyberslayer]

I kinda liked Agito myself, but we're all entitled to our opinions.

But you are right about Shouichi getting his memories back for only one episode that was a load of bullcrap.

I'm sorry if I'm coming down hard on Agito but I tried so hard to enjoy it. I assumed that it would be like Blade where it took about 20 episodes for me to start to get into it but it never came. The Agito costume itself is good and the theme song is always nice to hear but I can't find anything else to like besides those.

 

[Toku Prime]

[hide]I went into Agito expected some epic show that everyone talks highly about but I just never understood what was going on for the first 30 episodes, Souichi gets his memories back for 1 episode only to lose them again and make that episode pointless. Another Agito came out of no where, I was expecting him to be another character that was around for a while but nope, it was just some teacher we never met before. Gills and G3 were meaningless. Hojo was a bland proto-Kageyama who's only reason for being there was to mindlessly say "let's catch Agito" over and over....and to use G3 for an episode but to muck it up instantly. The exact same battle theme played every fight that every character was in (even the very last fight) and it got old real fast. Every time Agito got a new form it was downplayed so much that its like even the show didn't care he got a new form. Gills entire purpose was just to get killed over and over (You killed Gills again, you bastards!). The family that Souichi stayed with weren't interesting, especially Mana....Miss. Dues Ex.[/hide]

I don't think I hate Agito as much as you, but I agree with a number of your points. The main issue I had with the show is that right in the middle it totally abandons the entire concept of Kamen Rider (transforming hero battles monsters) and becomes "let's just watch a little girl be sad" for about ten episodes straight. If you're going to do something completely different then make it interesting! Gills dies so often I'm surprised he wasn't nicknamed "Kenny" by the fandom (and when he's not dying he's wallowing in depressed self-pity just like Mana). Plus, Gills really has nothing to do with the story. You could have removed him altogether and the show would have barely changed. Hojo was interesting at first, mainly because I actually wanted to see more of his Metal Hero-esc V1 suit, but kind of became a generic secondary villain. But I disagree with you about Another Agito. He was interesting in his own right. The G3 unit were the heart of the show for me. The show is more about them than it is about Agito until near the end. Hikawa and Sumiko were fun characters. The whole "warring deities" idea was pretty cool too. The series really needed more of the bike's "hoverboard" mode too. Coolest rider bike concept ever....barely used.

I assumed that it would be like Blade where it took about 20 episodes for me to start to get into it but it never came.

I also found that with Blade. Ryuki and Faiz also take at least a third of the series to become remotely interesting to me.