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Case M / The Heaven Casino

Case M / The Heaven Casino

" I had everything, gold, sliver, diamonds, rubies, riches and then that stupid game ruined everything! my family left me and now I had to sale this mansion! WHHHHHHHY?????????"

" Well, if u had won the game u would still have everything"

" Montreal! look I kno I didnt pay the money yet but, its comin! Can u wait?"

“ Unfortunately, no! Time to pay up! *MONEY*"

" No, wait give an few more days please!"

" I am sorry but, time is up and its time to PAY!"

He takes an coin from his stomach and puts it in his head and takes it out
"Another Life Coin 4 me"

" Havin fun?"

" Ah, the person who sold the GaiaMemory to me! thank u very much! I heard u got married the President's Oldest daughter!"

" I did and now I am at the top! But, thats not the reason why I am here, I need your Life Coins!"

"Why?"

" We r havin an experiment, we want to see if usin life source to make an GaiaMemory can it powerful"

" Well, if u can give Protection from the called ZWei than u have an deal"

"Thank u. Well, I must be off."
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"Everyone it time 4 Healin Princess with your #1 idol who gives u 190% of happiness, Terri Yamino."

" Hey! Sara, Healin Princess is on!" said Hiroto,

" Wats, Healin Princess?" asked Danya

" An Radio Talkshow with the gorgeous, beautiful, Terri Yamino with an angelic voice"

" Dont forget, the one who brings the world to peace" said Sara.

" Good Mornin everyone and I have exciting news! the place called Heaven's Casino is true listen to this post card someone sent me: 'Terri-san is true, my friend went to the Heaven's Casino and came back with 2 mil dollars!', amazin I wonder if I can go there and play an few games. Just kiddin!"

" theres an 1 in an billion chance u can win 2 mil dollars in one day, that story has to be false!"

*doorbell*" Comin!"

" PLEASE HELP OUR DAUGHTER!"

" SHE HAS GONE MAD WITH MONEY!"

"Um, this is 4 an psychologist not an -"

" SHE HAS GONE TO THE HEAVEN'S CASINO!"

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'Crone Bakina ,an girl who went to the Heaven's Casino gone crazy with money and now pretend now no one is in charge of her. Things like this make my city cry and won't let it happen to the city'

" Hiroto, I found the girl!"

"Danya, where?"

" She was just at an Jewelry Store and now she is goin at another!"

" Did she brought anythin?"

" No, all she said was ' if U want me to buy here, then give me something I want!' and left"

" Well, theres only 3 Jewelries here, U go at Arties and I will go to Levi's!"

" Got it."

Danya found Crone first at Levi's.

"Listen if got stuff that r the same that I have, then dont show it to me!"

" I am so sorry Ms. Bakina if u like I could give u some items that r not on sale untill next month."

"Deal but, only the most expensive one"

"Right away"

" Man, she is an jerk, I mean if my father let me did that she would killed me! I wonder where dad is now?"

" Thank u 4 the necklace, I will recommend everyone , NOT! Runnin low, good timin, its almost here."

Hiroto, comin back from his search, ran back to Danya " Danya! u found her?"

" Yes! and she went that way hurry!" They ran where she went but, couldnt found here

" Where is she?"

" I swear she went this way"

Then, an bus splashed them" Thank u 4 the bath jerk! And this suit is new!" " Well, I am goin back to change. Call Sara when u find somethin!" "OK!"

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" Hello? Mr and Mrs. Bakina?"

" Please thats the last of the money don't take it!"

" Be happy! I am about to get 1000 X this much and can't u stop me!"

" But, I can!"

" Who r u?"

" Hiroto Yuki, the Detective of this city and u miss, r being not respective to your parents!"

" U hired an detective? At least hire an better one unlike an low life like him!"

" WAT DID U JUST SAY!"

" Watevar, im goin back there and u cant stop me!"

" Hey! Get back here!"

Hiroto chased her and then, got an phone call from Sara " Hiroto, guess wat I found!"

" Kinda busy here!"

" Accordin to the lookup, theres an bus that has an stop thats not on the route!"

" An bus?"

" Yes, an bus why I ask?"

" Cause theres was an bus when she disappeared last time! Sara hurry on ZweiChaser and come where am I now. I will tell her Family that we found her!"

"Family?"

then all of an sudden Sara fell on the ground rememberin somethin about her past

" Come on baby sister, hurry!"

" Honey, she is little so, she cant run fast."

"Dont worry big sister will carry u"

" Hey, Sara can u hear me? Sara! She must be comin then"

" Why am I on the floor? Oh Yeah, Hiroto needs me! Danya! Im headin out !"

" Be careful!"

" ZWeiCarrier Launch Mode!" ZweiCarrier closeup with Sara inside and drove to where Hiroto is

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Author's Note: U kno in W where in Phillp's room,where RevolGarry is . How Does it get out? And would anyone notice that W's Garage came from the Agency? I want to kno. Any way, back to the story. :)
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"Man, Sara where r u? I cant keep runnin forever."

ZWeiCarrier Launched Sara on the ZWeiCycle"Hiroto! Get ready to jump!"

" I was ready for about 45 mins!"

"Sorry, there was traffic on the highway!"

"Wat traffic! your on an big truck that could crush cars!"

'"Do u want to come on or not?"

"YES!"

"Then Shut ur mouth and Jump!"

Hiroto jumped on and almost miss "Next time, drive closer to me!"

"Watever!"

"Get closer to the bus so I can come on and pull u up."

"But, wat about the bike?"

"Set it on auto-pilot then!"

"Got it!"

They got on board without bein notice, until "U two! Did u pay the bus fare to get here?"

Hiroto and Sara turn around and saw an short, round face, french lookin man "If U didnt then U have to PAY!" *MONEY* He transformed into the Money Dopant.

"I am Montreal Moni, owner of Heaven's Casino and your doom!"

"We will see about that!" *FIGHTER* *TORNADO* "HENSHIN!" *TORNADOFIGHTER* "We r the Wind Warrior of Duo City, ZWei! Now, Prepare to count ur crimes!"

Both of them fell out of the bus and began fightin. The Money Dopant shot an coin blast at them.

"Hiroto, change to Staff. That way we can block the attacks and reflect it back at him." "Ok!" *STAFF* *TORNADOSTAFF*

"U think that stick can help u? Well, think again!" The Money Dopant shot an another Coin Blast at them.

"Not this time!" ZWei used his staff to reflect it back at him. "Hiroto Let's finish it !"

"Hold it! If u defeat me u would destroy all of the captured life source I have and If u kill me, u will kill the one who I took it from. Think, wat would their family do?"

"My Family?" Sara froze up unable to move the right side of ZWei. "SARA! Wake up! Sara!"

Case M / An Family's Treasure

Quick Question : Which way do u like me to write in ? This way or the one I did before?
 
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Definitely better with all the spaces between the text

Author's Note: U kno in W where in Phillp's room,where RevolGarry is . How Does it get out? And would anyone notice that W's Garage came from the Agency? I want to kno. Any way, back to the story.

remember that episode where Shroud showed up in the basement to confront Phillip? (not sure what episode that was)
she came out from an open hatch which i believe would lead to the exit at the end of the first episode :coolshades:
 
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remember that episode where Shroud showed up in the basement to confront Phillip? (not sure what episode that was)
she came out from an open hatch which i believe would lead to the exit at the end of the first episode :coolshades:

true BUT then how no one notice it comin out of the agency explain THAT:169:
 
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Awesome dude, much easier to read. And i enjoy what you got going here. I like the two lost driver's becoming 1 w driver. That is nifty.
 
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Awesome dude, much easier to read. And i enjoy what you got going here. I like the two lost driver's becoming 1 w driver. That is nifty.

thanks and i wonder why the show's writer never thought of that i mean it would make more sense then just usin one body to transform
 
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Case M / An Family’s Treasure

"SARA! Wake Up! Sara!"

"*evil laugh* Wats wrong? cant move? well I can fix that!" The Money Dopant shot another Coin Blast at them.

"Sara! Dam it, guess I have to use them." Hiroto takes out an cell phone and an camera.

"U two! do your best and help us" *STAG* *BAT*. Hiroto puts in the 2 memories in to the phone and camera and they transform into and stag beetle and a bat. Both of them started to block and attack the Money Dopant.

"Wats with these things ! Get away from me!" The Money Dopant ran away while StagPhone and BatShot followin him.

Hiroto disables the henshin and catches Sara" Sara, wats goin on?"
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"Whew, I got away from them. But, where was that guy. He said he was goin to deal with ZWei."

"I did and only reason I didnt help was to see how they fight."

Montreal turned around and saw the dealer who sold him the GaiaMemory.

"U were there and yet u didn't help? Well, then I guess I WONT give u my LifeCoins."

"Oh, u will give us the life coins or else"

"Or else wat?"

"Or else this" *NAZCA* The Dealer puts in the memory on to an belt only Elite Dopants can have and turned into the Nazca Dopant

"Argh" *MONEY*

"U want to fight? Then an fight u will get"
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"Sara hasn't woken up for 3hrs now Im worry that she maybe sick."

"Sara has never gotten sick before, But I only known her about an year and she dosent remember anythin beside me meetin her and your dad savin her"

"Then wats wrong with her?"

"I dont kno"

'With Sara not wakin up, I cant search 4 the casino unless....'

"BINGO!"

"Why r u lookin at me?"
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The Beetle Phone,ringing, came to Hiroto for an phone call

"Hello?"

"WHY DO I HAVE TO BE THE SCOUT!"

"Because Sara is out and u r the only one that I could think of"

"I understand but, wat if they caught me?"

"Just do wat I say; pretend u missed ur bus and try to catch on the fake one and then use BatShot to send an video link to me so I can see wats goin on"

"I hope it works"

"It will, Sara did it alot of times and she never got caught"

"And how did she do that?"

"Oh, she acts like she knos how to be like them, so act like u played casino games before and u will be ok"

"Well, the bus is almost here, wish me luck"

" I hope she can do it"

"Do wat?"

"Sara! Your awake!"

"Yeah so?

"U have been asleep 4 almost 4 hrs now"

"I did?"

"Yeah, so why u were out cold?"

"I think I got an memory back."

"Really? which one?"

"Um, I think when I was 3 or 4 and I had 2 sister and my mom was carryin me and then my older sister carried me to go somewhere"

"I see, well Im glad u r awake now"

"Yeah so, wat did u hope 4 anyway?"

"Oh, I send Danya to do scout work since u were out cold"

"U WAT???"

"Dont worry I told her wat to do and she will be fine"

"Hello~! Shes new to the business and she might get caught or somethin"

*ringtone* "That must be her, Hello?"

"Hiroto, guess wat! I found Crone"

"Wat? where r u now?"

"In the casino!"

"Told u she can do it!"

"Told who?"

"Sara, she just woke up!"

"Really? Thats great! Well I will be settin the cam now. Bye!"

"Ok Batboy do your thing!" *BAT*

BatShot climb up on pole and surveys and transmit it into video feed

"Yosh, we can see wats goin on now"

"Ladies and Gentlemen, one of members has as me, Montreal Moni, to go on the Golden Game to win $ 10,000,000!"

*Applause*

"Now, lets welcome Crone Bakina"

*Applause*

"Now,Miss Crone wat game u would like to challenge me?"

"My top game of course, roulette"

"Well, let game begin!"

After a few rounds Crone seem to win but, Montreal tip off the roller to make the ball go to every place Montreal say.

" I can't believe it. I......lost"

"Don't worry, with this LifeCoin u can get everythin back."

"All right, lets go again!"

"Red 5"

"Black 6"

The ball landed on Black 6

"Im sorry but u lost and its time to PAY!" *MONEY He takes the life coin and drains Crone's life.

"Another one 4 me!"

"Hold it!" Danya comes out of hidin and confronts Montreal.

"Who r u?"

"I am Danya Akuma, and I am here to stop u!"

"BAKA! WAt is she doin?"

"Told u she can't do it."
"Really? Can u?"

"Um, no but, I kno who can. This person is smart, sytlish, and Hard-Boiled."

"Hm, at least she knos whos the best around here."

"Sara-Kun, Come over here and save everyone!"

"Wat???"

"Huh, looks likes she knos who can do this."
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"Why, Danya didnt choose me 4 this?"

"MerryChistmas!"

"Merry Chirst-, wait is not Christmas!"

Hiroto looked up and saw

"SantaMan, I havent seen for a while. Why u here?"

"Well, I was walkin by promotin and then I saw u lookin glum. So, I came over to give u a gift"

"Thanks but, um I dont need any gif-"

"Here have this."

SantaMan gives Hiroto an kiddie bag

"Um,Thanks"

"Your Welcome"

"Santa! Is Santa!"

"Got to run bye!"

" Bye, Why can't he give me an girl?"

"Hiroto! U ready? The bus is here."

"I Guess."

Hiroto and Sara rode the bus to Heaven's Casino.
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"Sara, U r here! Oh, hai Hiroto.",

"U must be the infamous Sara, I am Montreal Monei but, u kno that already, dont u?"

"Of Course, Money Dopant."

"Now shall we start the game?"

"Of course, bu tlets make an deal. If I win u will give us all of the life coins u have."

"Then, wat will I win?"

"Hiroto, can I have your memories?"

"Wat? Oh, Sure"

Hiroto hands over the Fighter,Staff,and Blaster memories. Sara takes out her Tornado,Flame, and Aqua Memories as well.

"We will be bettin these" Sara Puts the Memories on to the table.

"Sara! Wat r thinkin? If we lose, we cant turn everyone back and cant turn into Zwei anymore!"

"Dont worry, I have been researchin so, I should be good."

"Well, Wat game u want to play?"

"The most hardest game of all, Poker."

"Well, I guess, get your Poker Face on."

After an few rounds Sara started win about half of the LifeCoins, that was until;

"So Sara, Dose yout Family kno U r doin this?"

"My Family?"

"Yes Your Family. How R they?"

With Montreal talkin about Family Sara begin to lose the LifeCoins and the GaiaMemories.

"Well, thats game "

"Im sorry, Hiroto but, lost everythin."

"Dont worry, I can fix it. Montreal, how about an rematch? If I win I get the LifeConis and our GaiaMemories Back. And if we lose, u can have our life source."

" Deal, Well poker again I guess?"

Hiroto takes out an deck of cards from the kiddie bag

"No, we r playin my game, Old Maid."

"Baka."

"Hiroto can do this, no one can ever beat Hiroto at Old Maid. Even I cant beat him."

"Well, let the game begin."

Hiroto was winnin very fast and look like Montreal was done but, that was until Montreal did this trick. He made Hiroto choose the cards he says that he will choose, and Hiroto began to lose.

"I have 2 cards, U have 1. U will choose the right card."

Hiroto was about to choose, that was until his right suddenly move and choose the left one instead.

"Looks the Kirifuda chose me to win."

"But, how?"

"When u start to make me choose the cards I had put on my ZweiDriver to connect with Sara's ZweiDriver and her mind so, my right hand was controled by Sara makin me win."

"U cheater" *MONEY*

"Sara, Ready?" *FIGHTER*

"I was ready by time u beated him" *TORNADO*

"Henshin" *TORNADOFIGHTER*
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Both of them got outside,(some how:sly: ), and fight.

"Sara, change to Aqua." "Yosh, Lets do it."

*AQUA* * AQUAFIGHTER*

"If u think water is gonna cool me down. Well, think again." The Money Dopant shot another Coin Blast at them, but lucky while usin the Aqua side, Sara was able to block it with no problem.

"Hiroto switch to FlameStaff form"

"Ok." *FLAME* *STAFF* *FLAMESTAFF*

"Oh, thats right. Your havent forgiven your family, right?"

"My Family" Sara saw Hiroto and Danya as her Famliy to prevent freezin up. "I have an Family but, there not the smartest."

"Hey!" *STAFF MAXIMUM DRIVE* FlameThrust. Zwei defeated the Money Dopant.

"Listen, U r in grave danger of some one else. He is from the-" Montreal drops dead.

"Wat!? Usually when we execute an Maximum Drive the person dosent die!"

"And in danger from wat?"
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' Even though we defeated Montreal and kinda killed him, I havent forget the words that said of threat greater than we have seen, if we only now wat.'

"Everyone is Healin Princess! I have very excitin news theres an new hero in the city. and people r callin the person Kamen Rider. Its an half and half super hero with different power. Well, that wat everyone is sayin."

"Hiroto! We r bein discuss on Healin Princess!"

"Really?"

"Yeah ,we r bein called Kamen Rider!"

"Yosh, then we r called Kamen Rider Zwei, the wind warrior of Duo City startin today!"
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Case C/Cockroach Killer​
 
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Hey everyone! Sorry but, Im gonna quit this story. I wanted to only do an one page story but, I had ideas in my head and wrote all of it out but, since with school and all I have to quit it. For now, this will have to be discard away and never to be spoken of again. Hope people for liked this story understands.

Thanks
 
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