REOPEN I submitted my story concepts top the Power rangers audition email

[kamsasdn13213231]

You know I think this would all be better if it was all CG and everyone is replaced with Ponies. No I'm serious, ponies are the bomb diggity right now and it may seem ridiculous but who wouldn't watch a show with Ponies that turn into Pirate Rangers. Also I think that the "dark ranger" shouldn't even speak English, we should make it so we can't relate to him at all, so we should make him talk Finnish. The new Alpha shouldn't be even Alpha they should just get rid of the character entirely. Also it'd be more interesting if Silver hated Power Rangers and therefore is a more interesting character. The Red Battlizer should just be a giant combination of previous battlizers and given to Silver first but Red gets jealous and takes it from him so then Silver gets angry and becomes the second dark ranger and then a ball of fire becomes the new Silver ranger. And finally the power should be given to the new rangers by Goldar.

Also you shouldn't double post. It is bad for team.

Like you said no Ponies but I didn't want to add ponies in the show!I still prefer the american counterparts of gokaiger to be rebellions not pirates but confused rebellions who doesn't understand about the ways of the power rangers from earth including earths customs.About your idea of making the"dark ranger" speak only Finnish no ,he should speak only english because its an English language series and i thought one of the gokaiger actors will portray him (or maybe an american actor).I think i like the alpha i made for the series better because he will have the traits and personalities of the original alpha.I don't think you want the silver ranger to hate power rangers I want him to love power rangers just like his Japanese counterpart and his running gag will have him speak too much trivia about the power rangers history which irritates the 2013 rangers.I like my version of the Red Battlizer better it will be new and different and it will not be be a giant combination of previous battlizers but it will be powered by five previous red ranger coins and a mouthpiece to his helmet ( a tribute to the first red ranger) ,Your idea of having silver and red having jealousy and hate each other,a ball of fire to become new ranger BAD IDEA but i think the gokai silvers armor will become a Megabattle Armor to the silver ranger but with a titanium rangers head in it.

 

[Kiryurules]

Oh good God.

No offense man, but you should fix your sarcasm detector.

 

[Winter Chevalier]

Wow...I've heard of people not picking up on subtle sarcasm on the interwebs, but I've never seen someone respond to such obvious sarcasm with such seriousness >.>

Anyway, this is honestly a lost cause. He doesn't listen to a damn thing anyone says. He just goes on believing what he wants to believe. I give up typing out long paragraphs trying to get him to understand how foolish he's acting. But, I'll go ahead and repost my thing from the last page since he didn't even bother reading anything from after he posted...

Anyway, do you not listen to anything anyone is saying? You keep asking us to fix your work for you, but, that's something you need to learn how to do yourself. Unless you plan on paying us to do that kind of thing. The thing is, you keep saying that "my dreams are on the line! I'm definitely going to succeed!" But that's not how the world works, you have to put a hell of a lot more effort into this than you actually are. Your ideas are pretty far-fetched and would never be adapted. I don't understand why you keep going on and on about getting the original sentai actors to appear in the American version, because that's never going to happen. It's too expensive, their English isn't at a good enough level that young children will be able to understand them (and that being the target audience, that's a big deal).

To put it simply, big companies like the ones Saban runs don't give a damn about whether or not this is your dream and something you really want to do. Until you have experience, and a better grasp of the English language, then your "dream" will never come true. Get back to English and Writing class, study harder, and then maybe someday you might have what it takes for Saban to hire you. But your goal to get your ideas to be the next Sentai are futile and childish.

You say that you understand what everyone is saying, but, honestly I don't think you do. Everyone has been giving amazing advice, and you just brush it off because it doesn't fit with your dreams. You think you're good enough already, but you're not. Any writer worth their salt knows that they always have room to improve. It takes a lot of hard work to get your foot into the door in a job like this, and they aren't going to hire randoms off the street just because it's their dream to write for Power Rangers. Unless you have the skills to back it up, all your poorly worded, error ridden fanfiction is going to get thrown into the garbage. Please, just wake up and actually listen to what the people here are saying. This thread is just sad and pathetic, because apparently, you don't give a damn when people try to help you. =/

 

[Savior Den-o]

~EPIC SNIP OF JUSTICE~

You, my good sir, should be a mod. :thumbs: :buttrock:

 

[Winter Chevalier]

You, my good sir, should be a mod. :thumbs: :buttrock:

Lol, I'm not that awesome :thumbs:

 

[Kamen Rider Cero-G]

Lol, I'm not that awesome :thumbs:

Yeah you are

But yeah, let's just stop paying attention to SK no.2:thumbs:

 

[Savior Den-o]

Yeah you are

But yeah, let's just stop paying attention to SK no.2:thumbs:

SK?:sly:

 

[PyroturtleZX]

Okay okay so I thought about it and this is what you should fix

• The Dark Ranger shouldn't even speak a real language, he should be so distant and cold as a character that there should be absolutely no understanding him
• They keep Akaranger but he's actually evil now
• Alpha is also evil now and he'll be the new Barizorg
• The ball of fire should still be the second Silver especially since it emobdies the powers of past rangers and a ball of light would imply it's that guy from SPD
• Silver shouldn't even get Gold mode, instead He gets a Gold gun that shoots the faces of Sixth rangers
• The first silver should totally turn evil and despise having to be entrusted with his power because that's sooo much more interesting than him loving PR
• Red Battlizer should be a giant pirate ship that shoots ranger kieys

 

[KingRanger]

Shouldn't this go in the fanfiction forums?

 

[netro32]

SK?:sly:

Sentinel King. He would do the same thing...but at least he kind of sorta knew when to just give up or stop pestering people about it. This guy just really doesn't understand.