Wow I was going to read this fic and the come back here saying how silly it was and make jokes but.....wow. That kid as some serious mental issues to come up with what he did. You would have to be at least 18 to be able to handle this. Seriously kids don't read it.
There's stuff as bad as Agony in Pink all over the place now, it's just that fanfic has turned into such a deluge that it's hard for any one story to stand out.
In the 90s, much less was posted so the transcendent stinkers could be sifted out of the chaff more easily.