Kamen rider remake

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Now the continuation!(I will try to simply this as much as possible) Upon waking up, Takshi finds himself strapped down on an operating table, masked men surrounding him. Understanbly angry at what has happened, he demands and explanation. One of the masked men explains that the whole think tank was funded, and mostly staffed by a transhumanism cult. Basiclly they're a combination of my plans for SHOCKER above and the cult of Gorgom, and they have a front as a corporation serving cutting-edge tech(think Gorgom/Shocker with Smart Brain as a front). When asked what they are doing with his research, they mention that with all their advancements in cybernetics, they had a hard time stopping tissue from rejecting the artificial components, but the virus, in addition for strengthening a human body, can be used to make the body accepting the cybernetics. Hongo recognizes the man's voice as Midowaka, and shouts at him at how he can just go along with this, Takashi's voice conveying a sense of betrayal. His response is just to say that he didn't want what was coming but Takashi's discovery had forced their hand. Basically they can't let him go with what he found out and he has no more use to them, except for the fact they don't like wasting good test subjects, so they decide for all of his accomplishments that he did for them, he will be their first test subject for the new virus and cybernetic enhancements. Scared, Hongo tries to struggle, but they soon place him under and in a dream-like state he is partly aware of them cutting into his body, replacing his heart and lungs with stronger cybernetic analogues, and infect grasshopper DNA into him radically altering his muscles and nervous system and causing him to grow a exoskelaton, intertwining carbon nano tubes into the new musculature, and metal plating his bones, polarized lenses in his eyes,(see first post for more)... IN the end he ends up looking like an heavily scared Shin.

 

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Later after the surgery is nearing completion, Midowaka decides to rebel, sick of seeing the order he so much believed in causing his student and friend so much pain to suit their own ends. Needing someone to help him rescue Hongo, the professor enlist Hayato for help, but doesn't tell him the whole story, only stating that Takashi is in danger. Of course the rescue doesn't go as planned... long story short, Rumiko ends up following Hayato to where the think tank is located and see a great deal of carnage outside, the whole building on fire. Inside Midowaka and Hayato, who had set off the explosion watch in shock as Takashi, having snapped from the pain of the surgeries, rips the guards after them to pieces. Soon however, he collasps in pain, forcing Hayato and Midowaka to carry him off. They soon find a truck (filled with some misc equipment and a AI being prepped for transport) and plan to take it. Unfortunatly as Hongo gets in the back, guards come in and start shooting, Hayato is killed trying to protect takashi and Midowaka gets a fatal wound. Angry, but unable to do anything as the fire goes out of control, Hongo is forced to drive away on his own but still in great pain. Later police arrive on the scene just as Hongo drives off, and soon find the body of Midowaka and take him outside to administer first aid, but it ends up being too late, his last act is to mutter Takashi's name just as he dies, with Rumiko watching, crushed emotionally, and left wondering what Takashi had anything to do with this.

 

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Next up i admit to ripping a bit off the beginning of Kamen Rider ZO. Long story short: Hongo keeps driving for awhile and soon ends up at, and crashing into, an untouched area in the woods, basically, where the movie Kamen Rider Zo started. Hongo, still in much pain, crawls out of the wreckage and passes out, into a coma. During that time the virus in his body cause the inorganic material in his body to fuse with all the organic material in his body as the days turn into weeks into months into years, his body changing from a combination of mutated organs and muscles with cybernetic implants and enhancements to a bio-mechanical creature. Something like this http://peaceguy.deviantart.com/gallery/10200345#/d2tl4g1 here (or Kamen Rider Black if you prefer]]. Basically while his body looks like it's completly made out of artificial parts it acts just like a flesh and blood body, but works better. He wakes up 3-5 years later, much of the events before hand a blur, and very much shocked at his body.

So what do you think of the premise

 

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Any opinions at all?

 

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Come on, I need somebody to respond.

 

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Maybe a character profile to get started?
Hongo Takashi: Normally, he presents himself as a collected, quiet individual. He really doesn't speak much, sometimes even lost in his personal thoughts, and when he does say anything it's usually right to the point of a matter. On the surface this seems like he is shy and not wanting to be at the center of attention, and you'd be right. However, he gives off an aura of quiet intensity, a rage and passion that's simmering beneath the surface of his quiet nature. You can see glimpses of this in his eyes whenever is is witness to a great injustice. While friendly to others, he attempts to keep others at a distance due to the constant danger that surrounds him. This is a bit hard for him, especially when Rumiko is involved, and causes a misunderstanding when they meet again for the first time. While revenge against the cult for what they did to his body and friends is constantly on his mind, that is not to say he he's obsessed. He is understandably angry, nut has seen first hand how destructive he can be when letting that anger go, and how dangerous he can be. Revenge isn't his only motivation, simply by virture of the fact he is a good man at heart and cannot stand Shocker's activities. As the kamen rider, he presents himself as a silent hero, letting his actions speak for himself, and taking a direct approach to fighting his foes. He doesn't go for anything fancy, instead attacking hi foes with intent to cripple, ripping off limbs, or going for the eyes. Unfortunately, due to this fighting style and his frankly monstrous appearance, the people he tries to protect tend to be afraid of him.