Kamen Rider Knights

[KamenRiderIota]

Sorry.... I shouldn't have run my mouth... My comment was uncalled for and I should have been more patient like you have said.

I now realize how immature I really am now. I don't think I'm quite yet ready to play RPs, so feel free to not approve my profile period. I deserve anything that will happen to me.

 

[MagiPink]

Sorry.... I shouldn't have run my mouth... My comment was uncalled for and I should have been more patient like you have said.

I now realize how immature I really am now. I don't think I'm quite yet ready to play RPs, so feel free to not approve my profile period. I deserve anything that will happen to me.

KamenRiderIota please do not beat yourself up like that okay? It was simply a misunderstanding is all and accept your apology. I am not basing my final decision on what had happen. Seriously that's all water under the bridge now, okay?

After a discussion with Dark Kabuto the profile asides the part of the Shadow Golem does not quite match the storyline. I would not like to see you give up so easily Iota, and hope that you give it another shot. As for NPC characters, yes, we need to have information on that as well. It is to give everyone a grasp on the character if they include that person into a post

 

[KamenRiderIota]

Yeah, I guess it's all water under the bridge now.

But, do you have any ideas how I could integrate it into the plot? Thanks.

 

[MagiPink]

Hmmmm.....

The best thing that I can say is try rereading everyone's profile to give you a better understanding. I'll take another look over and see what I can do to help give you an idea. Though it won't be either till later today or tomorrow due to not feeling so hot right now.

Everyone, I must apologize deeply for right now feeling a bit off. Not sure if its due to working a late night shift with little sleep, or not taking my medication earlier in the morning like I should. So please bare with me a little longer. I shall keep working on the post tonight as possible.

 

[Sieghartdarage]

Don't push yourself, Magi. Just chill and get some rest. Hope you'll feel better after what you've been through.

 

[MagiPink]

For one thing, I'd like to point out if you can rephrase his relationship between his parents. Like shorten that due to their work were not around as much. Something like that along the lines.

The next advice would be giving us an idea to why he is neutral character. What reason does he have to be playing both sides of the feel. These are a few things I'd like to see you consider. Hope that helps

 

[Ziginz Zegell]

Been a bit distracted as well, not tomention my mojo has been gone for the last few days. Getting back into my creative state though so hopefully I will be able to assist with future endeavors and make some good posts very soon.

 

[MagiPink]

Quite understandable and look forward to seeing your post soon. No rush, I have no intention of rushing anyone to post. I only must apologize for the bit of delay on my part and now assure everyone that I'm back on track:anime:

 

[KamenRiderIota]

edited it again, hopefully it's satisfactory!

 

[MagiPink]

After taking another glance over the profile have noted the few changes continues to feel much like your first submission. The profile really does not quite match up with the storyline and cannot approve it. Like for example Aesir knows about non-earth made henshin devices such like Kaixa. Having him eventually turn into a fantasian due to the device duable.

It really was a hard call for me to make.