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If I can step in a moment to offer my "person off the street" opinion...

I was sort of intrigued by your initial post and some of your tech demos. I can tell you have a lot of drive to see your project through and that makes me want to root for you. But...

The promo was a massive turnoff. I know you say the movie itself will not use the sound effects or music but in that case I don't know why you did it that way. It's like you figured "People like Scott Pilgrim, so if I do something with the same jokes as Scott Pilgrim, people will associate my movie with Scott Pilgrim and like it."

It makes me question your actual creativity and whether your project will contain anything but tired internet memes and rehashes and in-jokes from better movies and series. The storyboard you posted reinforces that feeling for me. (A Power Glove joke? Really?) Of course, some people do like that sort of thing, so don't take my word for it.

Otherwise, I just want to note that your saying "I'm never going to waste time shooting footage that will never see the light of day [...] because take 2 or 3 was great." doesn't put me in mind of Robert Rodriguez. It puts me in mind of Ed Wood. That guy also had a lot of drive and passion to make movies and friends who wanted to help him see them through, but he was incapable of stepping back and taking criticism where he really needed it. (I see that latter bit here, too.)

Please keep in mind I'm not saying anything about what your final product will or won't look like; I'm just talking about the way you're pitching this, and the things about it that make it seem less appealing as a place for my money to go. But of course, I'm just one person, and I'm sure you'll ultimately do as you like.
 
This really is the last reply.

I honestly hope it is not. I really would like to see you continue sharing what you've got and honestly considering what we have to say. If you think you are being driven away, it is because of your inability to accept criticism. The thread Dai linked to clearly shows that. The same exact conversation went on there just as here, ending in the same way.

This will be a hindrance to your growth as a filmmaker until you grow some thick skin. Of course all advice must be taken with a grain of salt, but there is a balance, and you're tipping the scale way over. Like I said, I'm a writer, and I've seen people come into critique groups, get all huffy when people question elements of the story, and never come back again. And never get published. Or if they do get published, it's a blink-and-you-miss-it work that gets them little praise, little profit, and little reward. Don't be one of those people.

As for the promo, I was expecting something stand-alone that would be an "experiment" to show off your skills. Instead you've posted another plea for money in the guise of a short. Totally not what I meant.

If I'm to critique that [real honest thoughts here, not trolling, please read], your camera work needs a lot of improvement. Not the improvement of high-definition, either. I'm talking framing; I liked the over-the-shoulder shot of you talking to Karen, but besides that, there was nothing going on more than basic point-and-shoot. You should play around with the angles more, and focus on framing things with more thought to what's being shown. Also, play around more with variety; everything looked pretty much the same throughout and frankly it got boring. If you want to breathe life into your storyboards, you're going to need more practice or else the final product will suffer. This is something HD and lens adapters won't help you with.

Work on that, make something else for the time being, practice, practice, practice. And if you want to make a good name for yourself, clean up that Youtube account and populate it with something you can be proud of. I'm not going to go too much into the Ronald McDonald stuff because I've got some serious issues with what you did there. All I'll say is: take that **** off your page. It's hurting you. Bad.
 
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I honestly hope it is not. I really would like to see you continue sharing what you've got and honestly considering what we have to say.

Okay, fine.

If you think you are being driven away, it is because of your inability to accept criticism. The thread Dai linked to clearly shows that. The same exact conversation went on there just as here, ending in the same way.

So you read the entire thread I take it? That means you saw they were NOT answering the question I asked ( "What are some ways to raise funds?") and instead trying hard to convince me not to make a film at all.

Let me link you to another recent thread from that forum.
http://fxhome.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=43888&sid=

Recognize some of the same names, don't you? That's the kind of "feedback" they give to someone who admits it was his first film.

Once upon a time that was a good forum for constructive feedback and advice on film-making. Now it has a clique of the same people who have been posting there for years who could give advice to people but instead choose to tear others down and mock them.

There are various kinds of criticism. The helpful kind is called "constructive criticism". To be constructive criticism, the feedback must be useful and respectful. This is not the kind of criticism I received from those critics nor from some of the people here.

Here is a personal example of what constructive criticism looks like:
http://fxhome.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=43888&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=15&sid=

Another kind of criticism is hypercriticism. It's criticism given out of a desire to find fault where there is none. For example, crying wolf about how my story sucks and I need to learn how to tell a story when they haven't read my story nor seen any of my stories.

The last kind of criticism I will talk about is hypocriticsm. This is where someone criticizes another for doing the same thing they do. For example, Daikamonohashi lecturing me on video production and how this genre can be done effectively with less than $1,000 when he's yet to make any video with a coherent story, intelligible audio or lighting the damn thing so there isn't huge grain pixelation on every shot.

Am I over-reacting?
No. Even you said this was his best film to date.
[ame="http://vimeo.com/7983847"]Episode 74b - "Adam is Not Korean (Part 2)" on Vimeo[/ame]

I have crappy, hastily-created game reviews that have more thought put into them, demonstrate more technical prowess and (most importantly) possess a narrative to maintain the audience's attention span.

[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O0BZoG9-T50"] Azure Dreams Review[/ame]

I've done a bunch of these reviews. Here's another.

[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zRoTuoQEl1Y"]YouTube - RPG Fanatic: Persona 4 Video Game Review[/ame]

Hell, I have a hastily made review of the original Ultraman series that has both better lighting and audio than the best effort Daikamonohashi has made on his fan films of Ultraman.

[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=So4dzspPySI"]YouTube - Ultraman : Original Japanese Superhero TV Show Review[/ame]

And I make these videos entirely by myself with whatever is laying around my apartment.
And they are better than your team efforts.

Daikamonohashi, the big difference between me pointing out your flaws and you pointing them out is you talked down to me first. You tried to tell me what was possible when you have nothing to back up your claims. I spent time explaining in detail what the money was needed for and you rejected it while pointing to your own finished and unfinished productions; none of which are representative of what I'm trying to do and are actually of worse quality than the body of work I've created without any assistance.

I was trying very hard to be nice but when so many response are talking down to me, that is where I cease trying to be polite. Someone even had the gull to link to some poorly made Godzilla and Ultraman fanfilms that are the exact kind of thing I'm trying not to make by getting the appropriate resources needed to create a quality production.

If I didn't have a thick skin I would not have continued trying to be polite as long as I did. There comes a point when after you've pushed hard enough people push back. The reason I'm uninterested in continuing to post here is because this has turned into a e-peen contest of who can do what.

And this is why we can't have nice things.

The promo was a massive turnoff. I know you say the movie itself will not use the sound effects or music but in that case I don't know why you did it that way. It's like you figured "People like Scott Pilgrim, so if I do something with the same jokes as Scott Pilgrim, people will associate my movie with Scott Pilgrim and like it."

Actually I like Scott Pilgrim; I'm a big fan.

Before the film came out I had to explain the visual style I intended for GKaiser with, "Look at this sequence in this anime!" or "Look at this sequence in Kamen Rider V3 with the zooms!" and a x1,000 other things that I wanted to incorporate elements from.

Which, if you think makes me a ripoff demonstrates you do not know much about film-making http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/HomageShot

If I'm a ripoff because I wish to include homages to things I love, so is every other good director alive today.

Anyway, now that Scott Pilgrim is out I can simply refer to it as a template for the visual style I want the film to have. I mean I still have to show people shots from stuff like Saint Seiya and Howard the Duck we have shout-outs to, but people can actually visualize what we are doing.

Someone says my creative vision changed because I wanted it to "look like it was shot in the 60's but today" and now I say Scott Pilgrim. What I was talking about is the camera techniques. For example, zooming in and pulling out. Zooms and pulls are not normally used in modern film-making and if they are used, they are used sparingly and primarily in establishing shots. Dolley and crane shots are prefered.

However, zooms were heavily used in older films for dramatic emphasis, especially those in Hong kong action films and Japanese tokusatsu shows.

Zooms are also used heavily in Scott Pilgrim for dramatic emphasis. I doubt this is coincidence. The framing and way actors behave is actually worthy of great consideration-- if you pay close attention, there is very little movement in characters, which I honestly think was purposely done to imitate the limited animation technique used in Japanese animation...but I digress.

I wrote, directed and (poorly) acted in a new Kickstarter promo with a narrative to illustrate I had the ability to make more than just no-budget game reviews. I could tell a story, I could make people laugh and I could maintain the audience's interest for almost ten minutes.

The short was made as a homage to Scott Pilgrim's opening scene to help keep people in the mindset of what we aspired to create.

If you thought we going to go out and film some people in half-finished costumes fighting then you had too high of expectations. Given the reaction I got from the original test footage in the unfinished costumes, I learned not to do that ever again.

And I doubt it would have mattered because when you're grasping at straws that have nothing to do with what is being discussed we have gone well past the communication breakdown.

I'm not going to go too much into the Ronald McDonald stuff because I've got some serious issues with what you did there. All I'll say is: take that **** off your page. It's hurting you. Bad.

It's not hurting me. The majority of people who watch it don't see it as being harmful and it wasn't intended to be harmful. Anyone who has a problem with a prank where some little girl over-reacted and her father picked her up and brought her closer to me so he could threaten to fight me in the parking lot is really grasping for straws. This is a country where kids wear costumes like that for fun. Where we buy animatronic Freddy and Jasons to put on our doosteps and hang dolls in nooses when Halloween rolls around, and often try to scare kids when they knock on the doors for candy.

And here's the funny thing: I wasn't even trying to scare anyone, I was just trying to prank the staff. It's pretty evident from the video that things did not go as planned.

If you're going to make an attack on my moral character you are going to have to do a lot better than pointing to some little girl over-reacting when I waved at her in a clown costume-- and left immediately after being asked to and have never done that particular prank ever again.

I'm sure there will be some kind of comment you want to make that you think is witty. Don't make it. I won't even read it this time. I sure won't respond to it either. Unable to delete this thread I am deleting this account. I have a lot I need to do before we start shooting the things we can already shoot (none of which are terribly impressive shots-- i.e. no fights since the costumes aren't finished) and I have no more time to waste trying to convince you that you went over the line too many times.

To be clear I am not upset because you don't want to pledge. I'm perfectly aware the majority of people who see the page will not.

My problem is with your attitudes toward a person trying to make a creative effort and you believing you that gives you the right to talk down under the guise of "constructive criticism".

Edit: Can't figure out how to delete the account. Blah.
 
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So Dai and I were up late working on the plot to one of our upcoming sub-par short films and I just had to come back and check this for a break.

While you’re figuring out how to delete your account, I just want to point out a few key things (and you will and should read them):

they were NOT answering the question I asked ( "What are some ways to raise funds?") and instead trying hard to convince me not to make a film at all.

Please go back and re-read those earlier comments. The astounding consensus was that you put Gkaiser on hold until you are competent enough to handle such an ambitious project. We are not trying to convince you to stop completely.

What I was talking about is the camera techniques. For example, zooming in and pulling out.

Techniques you did not use in the most recent promo. Try playing around with some zooms and such.

I wrote, directed and (poorly) acted in a new Kickstarter promo with a narrative to illustrate I had the ability to make more than just no-budget game reviews. I could tell a story, I could make people laugh and I could maintain the audience's interest for almost ten minutes.

Like I said, keep working at it. The short was definitely more presentable than your previous stuff and it’s a start, but frankly there wasn’t really a narrative and it wasn’t all that entertaining. Try and make something completely self-contained.

f you thought we going to go out and film some people in half-finished costumes fighting then you had too high of expectations

Half-finished costumes are the least of the original promo’s problems, as we’ve been pointing out for nine pages.

It's not hurting me. The majority of people who watch it don't see it as being harmful and it wasn't intended to be harmful.

The top comments on your first Ronal McDonald video:

I can not think of a more low life thing to do than intentionally terrifying a small child. I hope this dickhead gets his ass kicked by some irate parent in the near future. THAT would be funny. Not this.

Dude, this might have been funny, if you would have had your camera man scout out and make sure there weren't any kids in there. Ya know, just to be on the safe side.

I would kick this guys ass if that girl was my daughter

So that was you in the costume? Did it not occur to you that there may have been children in that restaurant ? And you tell me not to reproduce? IF YOU WERE AT ALL ASHAMED OF SCARING THAT GIRL THAN YOU WOULDN'T HAVE POSTED THIS VIDEO!! Why would you even have this on YouTube if you felt bad about it as you rightfully should? You are an asshole not a victim of circumstance.

what a butt face

And so forth…

Moral character stuff aside, the video is just plain tastless and unprofessional and if you want to have a reputation as a professional quality filmmaker, this will hurt you. Do you think people will donate money if they see that??

I’m not going to play the pissing match game except to say that I’m baffled that you think your hassles with Pedo Bear are better than any of Dai’s films.

Plain and simple: You are not as good as you think you are, and the piles of pages in this and the FX Home forum are indicative of that. Learn your craft with unrelated projects or you will CRASH AND BURN.
 
Hmmm,

Coming to this fairly late in the game, I'm glad this topic hasn't been locked and I hope this actually stays around.

There's a bunch of good lessons to be learned here. :sweat:
 
I wanna make a Tokusatsu as well. Give me money. :169:

But seriously, you're 27 dude. Just work. It cost me 100,000 yen (about $1000 US) to make my Gun Caliber suit so all I did was work my ass off for a month to earn the dough.

Simply put, if the people here are reluctant to back you up, you're just gonna have to do it yourself. That's what I did. I didn't ask for anyone's help on this board.

I worked, saved up, taught myself how to sculpt and mold, and then made myself a superhero.

As for my movie, it's already been shot and edited. The whole production pretty much took 2-3 years to finish, but it feels so good to have accomplished it.

If you're as passionate as you say you are, all the stuff these people say here shouldn't effect you at all. Hell, it should fuel you to make this thing even more. Although, I honestly do think that you're in over your head. :redface2:
 
Thanks for the good luck on the games industry thing --it's not so hard to get into really, again you start at ground level and then when people have faith in you you HAVE funding. It's how everything works and when I do get around to making my own projects I'll spend money to make money.

As someone who has a degree in it, it is unGodly hard to get into at the moment and I'm stuck in that position. Good luck on your course, might be better when you finish :laugh:

As someone whose has about the same experience as Papercut here in Television, you really don't have a clue and listen to his advice (and others).

No one has told you not to make it. Stop being a drama queen. They have said to hold off until you hone your skills.

Make a short film to show off your talents. Doesn't have to be long, but show what you can do. Easy and people will see what you could do. That and LISTEN to what people with more experience and knowledge have than you. It's a really simple idea.

Edit: After reading in the FX Home thread, no one has been horrible towards but given you honestly good advice, some of which hasn't been mentioned here. Infact, this user was helpful and he's said the same thing which even on page 9 we're telling you:

Sollthar says:

It seems you don´t understand at all what I´m saying to you:

I´m not saying "don´t make the movie". I´m saying, "Your video reel does not look like you have the necessary skill level to make something commercially sellable and chosen a subject which makes it even harder

And even they comment on your other videos on your YouTube account.
 
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I love how most of his last post was him attacking another fanfilm team for giving him criticism and then showing off his shoddily made Angry Videogame Nerd rip-off videos which are full of 4chan memes.

Just have to respond to the 'evil' (see douchebag) Ronald Macdonald thing. It was NOT cool! you defend it by saying that the costume could of been seen on halloween -but that girl did NOT look like she was old enough to go trick of treating. She looked about 3 to 5 years old. If she had gone trick or treating it'd of been to the three or four doors nearby her own home.

and the difference with Halloween is you KNOW that's the night everyone is dressed up. You don't expect to see some clown monster in the middle of a fucking random day at that age (or any age), do you? The fact you defend it and have no remorse is HORRIBLE.

Of course he brought her over, he had to get rid of the fucktard scaring her in a costume, without letting her get EVEN MORE SCARED (and possibly run off somewhere) because her daddy was gone. Learn to parent.

Moving on, as I too have MASSIVE issues with that video.

With the advice and criticisms here and on that other board (around what, 18 pages), you've only shown that not only are you not a very good film-maker, you can't take the advice of any OTHER film makers of varying industry status and would rather attack them.

I've since been sent some special effects test footage by Daikamonohashi and it looks better than ANYTHING you've done, so you should probably lay off of the Ultraman Sorta team. Because they are better than you.

Again, we're saying you need to improve your skills and self-fund it. Find your originality and creative talents as a director before you try and make a feature film. Fund a short yourself. Make it as a series of shorts. There are many ways around it.

You talk about how much you love Sam Raimi and Edgar Wright but you know nothing of their work. They do all their best work on a shoestring budget with improvisation - and you sure as hell can bet they didn't come on forums and beg for peoples money (especially with nothing to show they've got talent).


Also thanks for the good luck Shuuyu - if all goes to plan i'll b doing what we call a 'sandwich' degree here in the UK, which would give me a years placement at Ubisoft, Rareware or Lionshead before my final year of studying.

So i'd already have entry level games industry experience on my resume.
 

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