Got an Idea and a Question

Alright guys, I'm thinking about starting a fan-fic based off of Kamen Rider Faiz. I'm having some issues with it right now so I am going to post like hte basic idea. So here it is:

The story takes place twenty-two years after the end of the TV series. Mari and Takumi
became closer following all of the happenings and became deep passionate lovers. They
continued living with Keitaro in the Kikuchi Laundry and helping him out with business
while Mari still worked on her dream to become a hair dresser.

A few years down the line Takumi finds himself at wits end. He has lived a fairly decent
life with Mari as his love and Keitaro as his friend, but something in him still calls out. The
feeling of him betraying those around once more comes over him and he vanishes without
a trace. Mari was grief strickened by Takumis choice and even more so by her inability to
him that she was pregnant.

Keitaro took an active roll in helping Mari during her time of need and even Mihara and
Lina helped as well as they still worked at the orphanage. During htat time Mihara had
asked Mari to keep the Delta Gear. This was due to his wish to continue living normally
and the point that it was not needed by him any longer with no more fighting.

Unknown to all, The King of Orphenoch still lived. His body had been greatly damamged
in the fight with Faiz Blaster Mode. He now lay in a stasis tank in the former base used to
conduct experiments on orphenoch. Kageyama, former member of Lucky Clover and ow
servant to the King, has watched over him since that day. The King stirs and his voice can
be heard. “My time of revival is at hand begin the preparations.†Kageyama happily agrees
and with that sets out to recruit Orphenoch that will help her to attain what she wishes.
When the time was right she would once again take Smart Brain back under Orphenoch
control. With that corporation the hold of Orphenoch would grow beyond bonds and new
weapons could be made to finish what Murakami started those years ago.

Mari has her child and names him after her departed friend Sawada and Takumi. Sawada
Inui, now lays with a heavy weight on him. Not only is he human but he is orphenoch as
well. His form in a stae of flux every now and then until he gets older. His life plagued
with his own uncertainty just as his father. With the in ability to complete convey himself
to others he shuts himself away from the world.

Once more Smart brain is on the rise, with Kageyama feeding orders to a new chairman.
New Rio Trooper belts are being made, and a recreation of hte original Kaixa Gear is on
it’s way to completion. Underling all this is a new project to create what is known as the
God Belts. Two belts that represent Heaven and Earth and will be the Kings Salvation and
the tools to his resurrection. With no knowledge of these happenings it would seem htat
the world is in grave danger.

When the moment comes Sawada will have to take hte reigns that his father left behind
and he will ahve no choice but to fight for the people he loves.


Alright, now that is the premise. Now I'd like some opinions on this. Is it okay to have Sawada as a mix of Orphenoch and Human? I mean, can Orphenoch, even get down like that anymore? Other than that, I'm just wondering if it seems plausable. Hit me up guys.

Thanks
 
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I think Faiz deserves a follow-up story, and you seem to have pretty good ideas. Having Inui Sawada be half-human, half-Orphenoch will be a cool idea. Your writing style is good, too. I think you should go for it.

I have only one question: will you explain how Takumi lived that long? In the end of Faiz they seemed to indicate that he was dying like all Orphenochs too. Other than that point, it sounds like a good idea.

-Master P
 
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Yes! Another half-blood! So the child can use a belt other than the Faiz Driver, if they are to use the Faiz Driver.
 
Well, it was stated by Hanagata that Orphenock were the evolution of humanity. The only problem with this evolution is that it is too rapid cuasing the body to become unstable. But notet that later in the series I believe either Kiba or Murakami said that as long as the King surlives all Orphenock would survive. Now I interpret that becasue the King fully awoke and that he was not killed that Orphenock will continue to exist. I hope that sounds right . . . sounds good to me, how you guys?
 
Don't worry. I am going to try and keep everything to the way the series may have gone if it proceeded on. Mari being a very good mother and Keitaro being like an UNcle to Sawada. Takumi will not show his face for a bit but when he does, he is coming back with a vengeance.
 
Doggy Kruger said:
I like it!

But Mari and Takumi is going to take a while to get used to...
Yeah same here, I always saw them as siblings in the show, but they were more a couple in the movie.
 
Well, even though they had that chemistry of siblings. Takumi went through alot with her, and vice versa. There seemed more there to me than may have been seen. I mean look at how Mari tried so hard to get Takumi back after he revealed he was an Orphenock and left. Heh, Takumi even went as far as employing Murakami in helping him get Mari back after she died. Does that not prove a little something? Just my opinion though.
 

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