Okay, I suppose I should dissect your Aba story now, since I'm bored and awake.
Length-wise, each chapter is by far too short. Not much else to say than that.
Your grammar and usage is really off. First thing, you suddenly switch back and forth between the past and present tenses. That is quite a big problem. You need to pick one tense and stick with it. Past usually works best. Second, when someone says something, you should start a new line. You don't just blend it in with the rest of the paragraph, like you do repeatedly. Third, you don't describe much. Yes, many people who are going to read this have already seen Abaranger, but you still need to describe stuff. Descriptions add quite a bit of substance to a story.
Not to mention the fact that I really don't get what's so special about "That's So Raven" that warrants a team-up with the Abarangers.