Need some Advice

[Kylen]

If you have ideas, you can toss them. I'm not exactly putting anything to paper just yet, and I'm no where near done with my chapter yet (May be needing to extend the first fight scene a good bit, we'll see.)

 

[Ziginz Zegell]

My only problem is getting started...and run on sentences....and walls of text...and pacing. That is to say I like to pace around alot while I am writing while saying my character's lines out loud to make sure they sound right. To say the least I have an easier time writing in private.

So any plans for support characters Kylen? Not just other riders, but friends, love interests, family, etc.

 

[Kylen]

Well the current idea is that he'll be supported by a Magi-tech firm/testing institute (World is high magic, so I figured it'd fit), the feel seems to be leaning BOARD if it was ran/staffed by the members of the Den-Liner.

 

[Ziginz Zegell]

So a Science Patrol like group made up of professionals who arn't very professional? Always fun as long as you give each something that the fans will be able to see so they can look past their...more unique traits. You may also want to look at Hibiki since they have a neat organization that develops weapons and gear for the Oni, but arn't a huge organization like BOARD or Kougami.

 

[Kylen]

So a Science Patrol like group made up of professionals who arn't very professional? Always fun as long as you give each something that the fans will be able to see so they can look past their...more unique traits. You may also want to look at Hibiki since they have a neat organization that develops weapons and gear for the Oni, but arn't a huge organization like BOARD or Kougami.

Well, they are still professional (The Institute, as I'll call it here, is highly respected and makes quality tech. it's just that the other half of the cross over is from a lighter series, so I can't really go full BOARD or ZECTOR with it.

Currently in progress of rewriting transformation scene, as well as the fight scene so it lasts more then a page.