Gwen & Carmen: Special Event Thread

[Keith Justice]

Or you could, y'know, live among the molemen for the rest of your life. That's an option.

Don't do that again, Impy, please.

Find a better place to post on the board instead of coming to this thread to rag on Sentairanger.

This isn't that kinda place.

 

[Bolt]

This isn't that kinda place.

Yeah man. Here at HJ you can be open and say anything that's on your mind, unless it's something that the admin doesn't agree with or want to hear, then you're in big trouble mister!

 

[Michael Joe Red Mask]

Damn, I thought Sentairanger already posted a new chapter to his fic.

WHAT HAPPENED TO OM?!!!! :shakefist

 

[MegaRyu124x]

Damn, I thought Sentairanger already posted a new chapter to his fic.

WHAT HAPPENED TO OM?!!!! :shakefist

OM?

 

[Michael Joe Red Mask]

OM?

OM is Mom, said OM

 

[Bolt]

She opened up a chain of restraunts in the midwest.

Is that Om's Ome Ooking?

 

[Bolt]

Sentairanger, you seem like you have a definite idea of how you want your story to play out and that you have a solid foundation in terms of your characters, but your writing needs work. Try mixing it up and being more detailed and descriptive instead of making every new sentence a character quote. If you start improving your grammar and writing skills you could have a future as an author.

 

[Keith Justice]

Yeah man. Here at HJ you can be open and say anything that's on your mind, unless it's something that the admin doesn't agree with or want to hear, then you're in big trouble mister!

Dude, do you want to stay here or not?

In written form, I can't tell how serious you are being or not. Even if you are kidding, you have to earn that write through friendship.

If you feel I'm that kind of Admin and you have a serious issue, PM me and we'll talk about it, or if I'm that bad an Admin to you... maybe you don't want to post here.

It's up to you.

 

[Bolt]

:dance:


^^^ Watch him go!

 

[Keith Justice]

Nothing to see here folks... move along... move along....

Sentairanger, you seem like you have a definite idea of how you want your story to play out and that you have a solid foundation in terms of your characters, but your writing needs work. Try mixing it up and being more detailed and descriptive instead of making every new sentence a character quote. If you start improving your grammar and writing skills you could have a future as an author.

Well said, B. :198: