Neon Revelations Evangelion

Xarin

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-I can't Keep myself to stick to writing one story. Dammit-


Volume One : Morals


Chapter One : Where art thou Nameless?


High above the misty mountain plains, theres a simple little cabin, with a simple little chimney, puffing out small bits of smoke at a time. Inside the shelter, there was a young boy in front of the fire. He threw a log in and watched as the flame gratefully engulfed it whole, quickly racing all across the dry wood to feast on it. Flickers of fire would spark up and hit chain curtains that protect any escapees. The fire illuminated an orange glow on the emotionless face of a boy who had no name. He was a soldier in an ongoing war. He was no more then a human weapon, that was called upon to do the work he was made to do. He was defined as a NeoEva Operator, Or NeO. His title was NeO 03. To become a NeO, one was chosen at birth. The Parent of the To-Be NeO would sign thousands of papers, legally giving their newborn to the Government of New Tokyo. Most of the world had claimed that this method was wrong, and they had recruited from willing children to tran from a young start. However, the NeO's of New Tokyo were by far the most advanced. And our Unit 023 was one of the best. Near the door there was a small light that flickered on and off. It was wired to the Central HQ of the NERV, NeO Branch. When it went off, it would go on a constant red flash and alarms would ring in the cabin, signifying another battle raged, and NeO 023 was needed. Well it seemed today of all days he was needed. The only day that really had meaning to a boy with no name and no past. It was his birthday.

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"Where is 023?" Questioned a young girl, aged near 13 years. She was standing atop a tall building, next to a young boy, both were clad in grey uniforms. Her's had strips of pink running down the sides. Her hair was a bright blonde, cut short, barely passing her ears, and her skin was a slight tan. "He should be here by now." She complained as she turned to face the other boy whose uniform had strips of Red. " 021, What are our orders? "
021 was a pale boy, who had flashing red hair, and strikingly odd blue eyes. "We start without him. Let's Go 022." He responded quickly, leaping off from the building. As he plummetted downwards to a seemingly deadly fate, he quickly reached behind him, and grabbed something from his belt, and quickly attatched the device to a wrist brace he had on his left arm. " Henshin! " He shouted out. Suddenly Lights surround him, and the next thing 022 saw was a figure dashing straight down on the side of the building. 022 Followed her superior, and leapt off the building, repeating the Henshin act.

The two newly equipped soldiers appeared at the bottom of the building, where strange Deformities were sulking about. "022, you take the four on the left, I'll get the rest." 021 commanded. After a "yessir" the two took on the creatures.
The Deformities were classified as failed Angels. Creatures that evolved to a point where angelecy was allowed to be achieved, but they didn't meet the correct needs, so they would become Deformities. They all looked slightly different, but mainly ugly. Angels normally gathered and used Deformities as gaurds and henchmen. If Deformities lurked about, an Angel was on it's way.
The Leader of the two was clad in Red colored armor, from his neck down. He had been equipped with a small dagger, as he fought against the creatures. He pulled out his dagger and quickly made minced meat out of the first one, but the second had connected a punch through. 021 looked at him and smiled, the armor protected most attacks, his grin widened when he stabbed his dagger through the Deformity.
The girl had similiar armour, except her's was pink. She had been equipped with a type of gun. She aimed quick and her shots fired quicker. Her gun then overheated, and forced her to wait a cooldown period, as she locked it back in it's place, and dealt with the other Deformities by hand. Suddenly...

"Humans. Why must your hurt me and my friends?" A voice chillingly called out. Deformities can't talk, so this could only mean one thing. "AN ANGEL!" 021 shouted out. "Dammit, where the hell is 023!" 022 screamed.
"Right here!" And with that, from a nearby ledge, a boy with black hair and strange yellow eyes leapt towards the Angel. " HENSHIN!" He shouted. Lights emerged from his Wrist Brace and quickly engulfed him the way the fire engulfed the wood. Was he just food for the device? Was he just being used? Or was he using it. None of it mattered now, for the first thing he has to take care of, was this Angel. "Go back where you come from Angel!" He slammed his fist into the backside of the Angel, and pushed himself back to join his group, just in time to hear the blood curdling scream of an Angel. "Sorry for being la-" 023 tried to apologize, but the leader quickly cut in, "No excuses".

The Angel recovered and turned about, and quickly jumped back. " You damn Humans." Suddenly it dissapeared, and the team had lost it's mission. Quickly, their braces beeped with an incoming message to return to HQ. The three looked at each other, then they looked at the latecome and left.


"Starting today, you will be given Names." Announced the NeO Division Lead. " We have decided, that for you to become more aware of this world and to advance your own fighting skills, you must become part of the world. So starting today. You, " He says pointing at 021, " You will be named Ryosuke. You," Now pointing at 022, " Your name is Hikari. And finally, for the last of you, the late one. Your official name starting today, is Shuichi. Now your first assignment with these new names, is to go out and find a new home to live together in." And with that, all three opened their mouths and gaped in unbelievement.


Out on the busy streets of New Tokyo, the three children began searching for a suitable home. They had been ordered to find Civilian clothes and wear those instead of their Uniforms. Hikari had found herself a simple pair of jeans, a pink form fitting T-Shirt, and a tie to go around her neck. Ryosuke decided on wearing a long cargo pants with a longsleeved baseball style shirt. It's logo read " Genesis ", as he thought it had sounded cool. The three never understood what kind of clothese looked good, as a perfect example would be Shuichi. He came out of the store wearing shorts and a winter Jacket. As odd as he looked, the other two couldn't complain since they always thought of him as odd.

"Come on 023." Ryosuke called out. Shuichi paused and looked at him " It's Shuichi." Ryosuke slowly turned and sighed. " Come on. Shuichi." It brought a smile to Shuichi's face, to finally have a name. It was indeed a good birthday.

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(If I get around to it, I'll draw some sketches of these guys and upload it for you all to see) Please Comment if you like.
 
Volume One : Morals

Chapter Two : Man Against Angel

Shuichi found himself watching television. It wasn't the first time he had seen one of these, but it had been the first time he was allowed to watch without it being an educational tape. He had set up his room next door to Hikari's. Ryosuke insisted in getting the room at the end of the hall. His room had been equipped with the latest in NERV Gear. Though he never needed glasses, Ryosuke decided to wear them to make sure he would never have deteriorating eyesight just in case. Hikari had a simplistic design in her room. It was like any other girl's room, as she had pretty much copied the designs from a magazine article. She felt content with what she had, and left to check on Shuichi's room. "Oh my God.", She gasped. Shuichi's room was furnished with a Television and a mat on the floor. There was a small dresser for his clothes, but that was found to be useless, as his clothes were all over the floor. Shuichi looked up and said, " I read that boys are messy. So I decided to be as such." Hikari looked at him and just left, shaking her head.

Suddenly Ryosuke came running out of his room, dropping his glasses on the floor. He quickly brought out his Convertible Notebook PC and shoved it in Hikari's face. " Angel Alert! " He quickly began to take off his casual clothes. Quickly tossing his shirt into his room, and unbuttoning his jeans. Hikari blushed and looked downward, trying not to look. "What the hell 022! Get your uniform on! 023! Uni-Up!" Ryosuke shouted. Hikari quickly shot up and ran into her room and shut the door, getting a little privacy. She felt her heart racing, she never felt this way about anyone before, never really being able to feel emotions. But for some reason, seeing Ryosuke panicking and without his pants, just set her off. She shook her head, and quickly began to undress.
Minutes later, Shuichi came stumbling out of his room, and fell flat on his face. His "messy room" design, wasn't helping. His pants were still halfway up, as he was tugging it up while trying to jump back up. Hikari and Ryosuke waited by the door sighing.

"Okay! 02- Shuichi, get to the left, take out the Deformities. Hikari, you take out the right. I'll take the angel! Now go! HENSHIN!"
The three rushed towards their targets, with lights wrapping around them, transforming them into three soldiers of NERV.
"Do you honestly believe you," the Angel speaks, as he blocks a fist, " can defeat I?"
"No." Ryosuke replies. "I think I can Destroy you."
"Hah! Your just a Human child!"
"I'm a NeO. And your just a freak!" Ryosuke connects his fist into the face of the Angel.
"You shitfuck!" The Angel leaps back and raises his fist. "You'll be SORRY!" He screams as he slams his fist into the ground. Suddenly, the ground shakes, and the Angel begins to grow. " I am Myirisson! The Seventh Terrangel!" From the Angel, giant spikes grew out from his back, and his arms grew much larger in size. His over all body grew to the size of a Sky Scraper. " You will rue the day you messed with Myirisson!"
"Holy ****. Terrangel?" Ryosuke asked himself, Quickly turning to see his two allies. Shuichi was finishing off the last Deformity, and Hikari had came to aide him. "You two finish that off then join me. Up there." Ryosuke thrust his fist towards the sky and screamed " NeoEva! Materialize! ". His Wrist Brace began to glow again. This time, his suit also glowed. The Brace was a monument of technology, being a portable Matter Compressor. Now it was about to prove it's worth. It began to whirr and shoot out beams of light. Quickly, forming a giant figure. It was a massive mecha, colored a bright crimson red. Ryosuke got into position, and activated his jet boosters, and shot straight up and landed on top of the NeoEva. He entered down through the side panel and slid into the ControlPod. The computer came to life as the NeoEva began to move. Lights surrounded the inside of the pod, as a voice spoke out. " LCL Flooding, Activated. " The computer acknowledged his presence. It continued, " NeO authentication, scanning. . . 021. Welcome. Ryosuke. " He was surprised that it was already programmed to recognize his new name. His suit then glowed a bright red, and the voice returned, " NeoEva Operator active, Helm engage." Suddenly, plates of armor, from behind Ryosuke's neck, shot out and wrapped around his head, shielding his face.

Back on the battle field. Myirisson spoke, " An EVA? You DARE pit this abomination against me?!" Ryosuke was confused, but didn't halter. He had just finished Synchronizing. " Sync 75%" Annoucned the Voice. Perfect for fighting. Ryosuke thought up a strategy, and began to shift the gears, and thrust down the levers. Screaming as he was ready, he thrusted his gear down, and simuntaneously the giant NeoEva, thrust it's fist into the chest of it's enemy.
The Terrangel fell on one knee and looked up. " One Born of Lilith, DIE!" Then it shot itself toward the Mecha, wrapping it's legs around the Eva, making blows against the chest and head parts.
"****!" Ryosuke started to scream and he grabbed the Angel from behind and threw it back down. " Don't **** with ME!" Then Ryosuke noticed on his screens the stats. "Polyflex Armor torn?" The left shoulder of the Eva, was ripped. " You fucked my Eva. You FUCKED MY MECHA?!" Ryosuke forced the Machine to run and jump onto the Angel. It began bashing it's head into the ground. " IF YOUR A TERRANGEL, THEN YOU'LL LOVE BEING ONE WITH TERRA!". NeoEva 021 leapt back and took out a gun that was hooked to it's back, " You will SUFFER. " Ryosuke activated the tactics engine, and quickly allowed the Eva to be switched from Manual Control, to it's back up AutoPilot. While the Eva went dull and started shooting the Angel, Ryosuke switched to Comm Mode and informed HQ about the repairs that he would need, and how they should prepare for him. Then he switched to speak to his comrades. " You two, no need for your NEvas, Go back home. " He spoke with confidence, then retook manual control and finished his job.

The last thing Myirisson got to say... " The Abomniation. Has grown to such proportions... You will suffer for this Lilim. You and all your kind..."
Ryosuke was confused again, but preceeded to destroy the Terrangel anyway.


Miles away, at the NERV HQ.
"Does he understand yet?" One voice spoke.
"No. None of them do." A second responded.
"Good. Then we can precede?"
"No, They arn't ready. I know they aren't"
"We don't have time. Angels have already reached their second stage of Evolution. Myirisson was the first we've seen, but you heard him. The Seventh Terrangel. And I thought the return of the Angels was bad enough before. Theres only a matter of time before we meet the Returned. "
"Understood sir." The second replied. Then he turned off his Moniter. "It's gonna be a long week. The Commander of the NeO Branch got up from his seat and walked out of his Office to offer his congrats to Ryosuke, and watch the repair process of the NEva 021.



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EXTRAS
Terrangel: The Next step in Evolution for the Angels.
Myirisson is my own imaginative Angel. The rest of the Angels will have a real mythological connection. :P
 

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