Prime and admirable first attempt. Makes me wanna give it a shot.
My gripes, and you gotta learn to take 'em.... for myself the music did nothing for me, because I don't know where it's from thus couldn't hook me to watching the video. The video itself could use more of a driving theme behind it, other than just random cool clips... and the clips were too random and not seemingly timed to any beats.
I hope this is the first of many to come and I hope to watch your impovement as you continue to make these.
Btw.... you'll have to show me how sometime. I wouldn't mind taking a shot at making a music video sometime. ^__^