Rewrite A Series

[GoseiGold]

Choujinki Metalder

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-Metalder tries to be the good guy, except he is made out to have alterior motives by a scumbag news corp.

-Metalder has a time limit (reference to end theme) where he can only battle for 10 minutes or his body will short circut and be severly weakened

-Springer doesn't talk

-Metalder's bike is more similar to KITT from Knight Rider (Providing advice, weapons, suggestions and warning when his time limit will run out)

-Neros Empire is from another Dimension and they came to our world to 'purify' it (wiping out biological organisms and replacing them with machines)

-Has a feel similar to Spiderman 1 & 2 (3 BLOWS!!!) where our hero needs to get used to his power and responsibility and deals with possibly losing them.

-Metalder was a creation between Neros and the nazis in WW2, but was de-comissioned after he showed human emotions, since he was supposed to be the victory weapon and has his memories erased until he digs deeper into his origins

-Mai is a photojournalist who tries to prove Metalder is the good guy

-Metalder is a wanted criminal because of the mass hysteria and panic caused by Neros' actions, using him as a scapegoat.

-A Tone that is a mix of Blade & Ryuki

-God Neros is evil enough to kill androids or cyborgs in his ranks, because the human in them makes them weak and slow in his eyes

-Bleaker and more Darker ending[/HIDE]

You know it wouldn't hurt for anyone else to contribute

 

[Sentaifan'07 Xman]

KR Kabuto:
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-Tendou using less quotes from his grandmother
-Grandmother Tendou making an actual appearance
-More Camera time for Daisuke
-Dark Kabuto obtaining the Hyper Zector and Hyper Form
-Gattack's Hyper Form would be canon
-A referrence from GOD SPEED LOVE in the middle the show
-Dark Kabuto Fighting alongside when Kabuto and Gattack by performing a tripple Rider Kick on the head Native
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KR Decade:
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-Add more worlds about the Showa Riders, including Ichigo's World and V3's World
-Narutaki reveals himself as a member of Dai Shocker
-Kiva-la reveals that she also works for Dai Shocker
-Dark Decade making an appearance later on in the show
-All of the other AR Riders appear in the Great Riders' War
-Sayou returns to the show
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[FieryRed]

Shinkengers

After watching Jetman, I think while Shinkenger has decent villains, they could've been better, so here's my improvement for this sentai series:

[hide]-Gedoushu still send Nanashi and Nosakamata to the human world to create havoc, but they don't have to retreat to the Sanzu River after a short battle; I thought this gives the Shinkengers an easy way out of the battle.
-Gedoushu's elites, led by Doukoku and his lieutenants Juzo, Tayu, Shitari, and later Akumaro, would regularly target Shinkengers as they leave the protective realm of the Shiba House, just like Vyram would attack the Jetman members. Of course, it would mean that Genta has to figure a way to protect himself and his business.
-Doukoku has some sickness relating to the last time he was sealed, but he won't be as powerless as he was in the series. I'll also make it so that during a New Moon, Doukoku can cross over to the human world with ease.
-Juzo's duel with Takeru takes on even greater risk, and Takeru would actually lose Round 2 and had to be bedridden for a couple of eps. I thought their duels should've carried some true life-threatening scenarios to make the heroes seemed to be more in peril.
-Inromaru will transform all the Shinkengers into Super mode, unless the Shinkenger was using the Kyoryumaru in the Hyper mode.
-Takeru will specifically use Kyoryumaru, and others in the Super mode. He will also use it more often than he did in the series. This happens after the Gedoushu become even less relied on Sanzu River, and Doukoku can cross over more often.
-Koaru will be introduced earlier, when Doukoku is "cured", maybe around ep 42-43. She will lead the team after Takeru is "exiled". But Takeru will continue his fight and be restored around ep 46.
-Have the final assault of the Goudoshu after the Sanzu River overflowed to last for more than 2 eps; I want it to be truely apocalyptic. [/hide]

 

[Bigdog]

Here are my changes:

Ultraman TIGA
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In the first episode, the Ultramen statues beside Tiga's get taken, and since they are evil and those hosts,being evil themselves or selfish, aim to kill Tiga alongside destroying the monsters to portray TIGA as a menace .

Oh ,and Tiga cannot easily access his different forms early on, being stuck in a default Shodai Ultraman- esque form for the first 5-10 episodes. With that said, Tiga acquires speed form when he fights against one of the dark Ultramen and the Power form in episode 15 near death. The final Mixed Form will be acquired in episode 30 when he gets killed and revived by children's tears. From then it is the same in exception to an appearance of DYNA, a former evil Ultra statue,coming to fight against his partner and finishing him off and the few monsters present, kinda liek Gavan's final episode.

From there, DYNA would diverge...

Ultraman DYNA

While the first half was slapstick humor, the alternate would be as dark as the second half that was on TV and it would stay that way. But that doesn't mean the possessor of DYNA isn't as humorous as he was in the series. Besides that, a crossover between him, Tiga and Powered and Great would take place, with appearances of the actors in question. [/HIDE]


Tensou Sentai Goseiger[HIDE]

-The Skick , Landick and Seaick tribes would be separate for the first 10 episodes , fighting each other ala Ryuki style and only joining up when i benefits them. Finally, Alata brings the Goseigers together as he with the others realize their fighting has only brought misery to the people instead of helping them, which was their intention.

- GoseiGreen would come back, albeit as an antagonist with the empire much like Burai ,but unlike him he had amnesia stemming from being revived, implanted with false memories of Hyde abandoning him on the battlefield. He pilots a Sea Dragon that emulates the look and feel of Dragon Caesar , but with the transformation capabilities of the Won Tiger. With his boost of evilness he can take control of the four other Goseigers except Alata and create a mech gattai all his own, with the cost being his life shortened.

-GoseiKnight would function as Kameo did in Dairanger, as an unwilling participant in the war ,disguising himself as a teacher at a high school and a philosopher on the side to get away from it and help without violence, being a pacifist . Realizing their need for him, he becomes the GoseiKnight and forms GoseiGrand to fight them off, only to defend his students.

-Other GoseiAngels would show up in the final episodes, maybe to replace the core team when they are overly injured in the latter episodes, in fact having distinct animals of their own .

Pink:Gryphon, Eagle, Dove
Red: Chinese Dragon, Hawk, Butterfly, Raven,Swallow

Black:Chinese Snake-Tortoise, Wolverine ,Lion, Bulldog
Yellow: Leopard,Jaguar,Armadillo

Blue: Narwhal, Kappa, Sperm Whale, Starfish

And yes, clusterf***ked robots are required.[/HIDE]


Kyoryu Sentai Zyuranger
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-Goushi is switched with Zack, creating a dynamic never seen in both series. Zyuranger would have more humor while Bulk and Skull would probably get their butts beat, probably the closest to Tommy as friends.

Outside that alternate universe:

-Burai would be adopted by the king and queen while Geki is still with his father . He eventually becomes the Dragon Ranger but is defeated quicker than than Burai was since Geki's heart of justice breaks the candle's curse. Although he realizes Geki is his brother , he still pursues to defeat and kill him due to feelings of superiority and disgust towards him.

-Alternate Burai is overthrown by the other four and his coin is given to Geki, where he becomes the leader of the Zyuranger as the Tyranno Coin responds better to him than his own. He spares his borther's life and with that seen , he slowly becomes the older brother and friendly towards him. On and Mei and Burai get hitched in the last episode.

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Kamen Rider Kuuga

[HIDE]-Instead of the Rider being of a supernatural ancient kind, he would be a reboot of Kamen Rider Ichigo, but with the same suit . It is slowly discovered that he is not only a cyborg but a supernatural Rider.

-The Grongi would be a combination of human made and ancient.

-And Kamen Riders 1 and 2 cameo.[/HIDE]

Samurai Sentai Shinkenger
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-Bony Shitari would have a bigger role in the series ,secretly pushing Juzo towards good while trying to regain his former humanity. More of an Iroh and Octoroo mix than his original counterpart, he was sent to go behind enemy lines to kill off the head Gedoushou but as son as it is found out, he is turned permanently into his elderly squid form over time , and abused like Toad was by Magneto and enslaved to strategize against his allies. He does not go back to the Shiba House and sticks with Juzo, who becomes Shinkenblack with the discovery of an ancient Shodobrush .

-After the breaking of the Uramasa, Shitari pairs up with Kotoka and Chiaki, who reluctantly help him in finiding the lost Shodobrush, giving them his back story . Takeru relents at first , but recalls an elderly priest in his childhood who taught him alongside Jii and in recognizing it's him, allows the mission. Jii is angry , confronting Takeru on the risks and forbidding Chiaki and etc to come back. They find the ShodoBrush , but it is protected by darkness and so only Juzo could go through. And with his dying breath ,he reaches and grabs it ,breaking his tie to the Uramasa and restores his humanness gradually. Shinkenblack goes on his own path , fighting with the other Shinkenger when need arises. He gets killed by Dayu ,and she thereafter kills herself ,but he is discovered alive due to a copy he constructed, similar to that other episode. He begins to have feelings for Kaoru who rejects him, not for his former self but for concern for his wellbeing. They eventually get married and have twins ,one of them named Dayu in his former love's honor.

Bony Shitari does acquire a disguise as a human ,but nonetheless resides playing Go with his student Jii at the end of the series in his squid form and casual clothing, raising Takeru's son with Jii as he did with Takeru.[/HIDE]

 

[Toku Girl 2009]

If I could rewrite any Kamen Rider Series it would have to be Hibiki here are the changes I would make

• Introduce Kiriya at the start of the series and then slowly write him out, as appose to outright killing him.
• Bring in some of the events that are currently only mentioned like The Festival Concert that Hibiki told Asumu about.
• Give Asumu his own oni form, as appose to making him a downsized Clone of Hibiki like the Hyper Battle DVD.still have him be a Takio Oni
• Have Akira become an oni (this Would help connect the DCD Hibiki world)
• Give Todoroki and Ibuki secondary forms like Garren and Chalice in KR Blade

As for aesthetics

• Keep Asumu’s opening narrations think “previously on power rangers.”
• Keep the flashing Kanji for attacks and other impotent things
• Keep the closing sequence

Decade Hibiki
Instead of having Hibiki Turn into a monster have shuten tenno - shin hibiki appear

 

[kokowaks]

Kabuto
[HIDE]Kagami is the main hero.. be it him being gatack or kabuto... which would give the series a more humanistic appeal..[/HIDE]

Decade
[HIDE]the whole "diend shoots decade on the face" actually happened... and not the whole movie war decade part failure[/HIDE]

W
[HIDE]the whole show is run by Joker, Accel, and Skull... probably with the same character pacing as how they did with the 3 riders of agito...
Phillip would best fit as a supporting character... he could be cyclone/W(with shotaro) but not as a main character[/HIDE]

 

[GoseiGold]

Tensou Sentai Goseiger

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-GoseiKnight can take a fake human form so he can live amongst humans inconspicuously

-Introduction of GoseiKing, who's lineage and powers came from the Firick tribe which was wiped out by WarStar

-GoseiKing is a human from the land down under (Australia)

-GoseiKing's weapon the FirickLance can transform itself into the other Goseigers weapons and changes their names (ex, FirickSword, FirickAxe, FirickBowgun, FirickClaw, FirickShot)

-His robot(s) are Gorilla, Buffalo, and Tyrannosaurus

-Nozomu teaching GoseiKnight how to be human to fit with his disguise

-Burajira was the leader of WarStar but believed to be dead, but later comes back and kills off the yuumajyu and matrinis (except for Metal Alice who worked for him as a double agent)

-No Datas Hyper (that was retarded)

-Eri not being a total airhead but stupid on a tolerable level

-Hyde constantly mourning the demise of GoseiGreen

-GoseiKing being human with Gosei Tenshi blood makes him not so accepted by the team (except for GoseiKnight, Nozomu, and Moune who was never supposed to be GoseiYellow but ended up with them when the original GoseiYellow was murdered by Dereputa)

-Original GoseiYellow was Alata's girlfriend who vowed revenge against Dereputa for her death (He was Skyick, she was Landick, it was looked down upon because of being from different tribes)

-GoseiKing and Moune share sympathy for eachother since they weren't meant for their respective powers, Agri jumps to the conclusion that they're dating (for comedic purposes, even though they're just being nice to one another)

-GoseiKnight trains Alata to be a master warrior because he feels he is not material for the GoseiRed powers

-Burajira plots the deaths of Mons Drake and Metal Alice so he can use their powers to summon the ultimate dark energy wave that will turn the earth into a wasteland, because he is a GoseiAngel who wanted nothing more than chaos and suffering because it amused him, He also brainwashes Dereputa into being a servant so loyal he is willing to kill anyone he asks him to just for fun.

-Moune and GoseiKing start having feelings for eachother (thanks to Eri and Agri no less) Burajira tries to exloit this because GoseiKing has an untapped energy source so powerful if provoked could cause horrific destruction, he kidnaps Moune and has Dereputa beat him to a bloody pulp which unleashes the GoseiCrash power, which incidentally makes him invincible due to the fact he is using his emotions to fight, Burajira tries to drain this power, but it is too pure for a dark being like him to take, the power also kills Dereputa.

-Burajira instead takes control of GoseiKing instead of Knight because of the GoseiCrash power but it is broken when Moune admits what she had hidden deep inside, Burajira tries to kill her but instead strikes GoseiKing, who now leaves Burajira with no allies, GoseiKing tells the goseigers though that their power united as one can kill Burajira and summon a power greater than he GoseiCrash

-In the end the Goseigers decide to go back to GoseiWorld, all except for Moune who decides to stay in the human world with GoseiKing.

-GoseiKing and ShinkenBlack fight the Buredorans in the team up so Takeru and Alata can fight the Burajira/Doukoku hybrid creature (as i like to call him)

-GoseiGreen is ressurrected at the end too. (just to make you people happy)

EDIT:-In an epilouge Agri learns to accept Moune and GoseiKing's relationship, but freaks when Moune tells him that she and King are getting married

EDIT:-The original GoseiKing's spirit appears at the end and tells him he did a wonderful job as his succesor [/HIDE]

 

[Axel]

DECADE:
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- The Rider War has caused all the original Riders to get sent into Alternate Rider Worlds and has given them amnesia. Decade must team up with them in order to help regain their memories. After teaming up with Godai Yusuke, he joins Tsukasa.

- Also add in the Showa Era Rider Worlds. Ichigo and Nigo would be one world and would involve a 4 episode story arc which discovers the Rider War Origin, and Kuuga's Rising Ultimate Form Origin as well.

- Kaito is Tsukasa's childhood friend. His connection to Glaive is the same.

- After teaming up with the Riders, Tsukasa is given the K-Touch upon visiting the Nega World.

- The Riders regain their memories and remember that Decade is the Destroyer of Worlds. They convince Godai to join them again. They fight Tsukasa in the same fashion as Episode 31.

- Diend doesn't shoot Decade, but helps him defeat the Riders.

- The Riders are sent to the alternate worlds by Narutaki. He reveals himself as a high ranking member of Dai-Shocker. This then leads into Movie War 2010.[/HIDE]

MOVIE WAR 2010:
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-Decade is sent into the Real World and sees his own doppleganger who reveals himself to be Violent Emotion Decade with Kivara being his minion. He fights Tsukasa and then infuses with him, creating a bloodthirst to destroy all the Riders.[/HIDE]

Alternate Story: NEGA WORLD DECADE MOVIE:
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- This is an alternate retelling of the Decade series where all the Original Riders exist in one world and are aware of each other's existence.

- Tsukasa and Natsumi are two high school students who secretly love each other, but don't want to admit to each other.

- Tsukasa and Natsumi are good friends with some of the Riders especially Kuuga, Faiz, Ryuki, and Kabuto.

- Hajime Nakamura (Kamen Rider Alternative) creates the Dark Riders and unleashes them on the entire world.

- The Dark Riders kill Godai Yusuke, Shinji Kido, Takumi Inou, and Tendou Souji and assume their human identities.

- Tsukasa sees all his friends die before his eyes. The Riders kill Kaito after he sacrifices himself in order to let Tsukasa and Natsumi get away. The Dark Riders are about to kill Tsukasa and Natsumi. He stumbles upon the Decadriver, an unfinished project of Hajime's.

- Tsukasa transforms into Decade Violent Emotion and attacks the Dark Riders. He has gone berserk, but is able to protect Natsumi.

- They come across the K-Touch, which is given to them by the mysterious Alternative Zero who turns out to be Narutaki!!!

- After becoming Decade Violent Emotion Complete Form, Tsukasa kills all the Dark Riders except for Alternative, Dark Kiva, Ryuga, Orga, and Dark Kabuto. The Three Riders surround Tsukasa. He uses all of his power to create a final Dimensional Kick. He dies and the Kick heavily weakens the surviving the Dark Riders and they retreat. The blast was so powerful that it sent the Decadriver into the Real World unknowingly.

- Tsukasa dies in Natsumi's arms and they confess their love for each other. Natsumi takes the K-Touch and buries it.[/HIDE]

W:
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- Change the Ending Arc by including Decade teaming up with W in their final battle.

- Foundation X ends up having a more important role as it will be the final villain for all future Rider Series.[/HIDE]

 

[Sentaifan'07 Xman]

Super Sentai:
-Tensou Sentai Goseiger
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-Blajira would be plotting Mons Drake's death. Then he would rather absorb Metal Alice's power to make himself stronger.
-The Original Goseigers would make a shadowy cameo in a dream state like in the final episode of Gekiranger.
-The three tribes: Skick, Landkick, and Seaick would be fighting against each other in a Great Devine War (G Gundam/Kamen Rider Ryuki-style)
-Gosei Knight would have a human host
-Dereputa would also be resurrected as a part of the Matrintis empire arc.
-Gosei Green would be resurrected but under Blajira's mind control and with no memories of his death or his time in the Seaick tribe.
-Moune and Agri would get less involved with Alata, Eri, and Hyde but would join them in special occasions, including the battles.
-Eri would quit acting so much of a upper-class ditz and be more like middle-class type of a ditz.[/HIDE]

-Engine Sentai Go-Onger:
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-Use less cheesy comical jokes
-Add the seriousness of Sousuke and Miu's relationship
-Give Hiroto a darker side as his jealousy for Sousuke turns to hatred
-See Yogostein, Kitaneidis, and Kegareshia reunited as Yogostein waits for them in the gates of Hell
-See Gunpei getting married to Saki's sister, Sanae in the final episode
-See Restutaka's Human World Counterpart making a cameo in the final episode[/HIDE]

Kamen Rider:
-Kamen Rider 555
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-The Orphenoch King making an earlier appearance
-SMART BRAIN's primary objective to retrieve the stolen Rider Belts to make way for the Orphenoch King's arrival.
-Yuka would change into Crane Orphenoch to kill her own family first, instead of her classmates
-Kusaka attempting to rape Mari to make her love him, instead of Takumi
-Hanagata would actually talk to Mari and Rina before leaving to see Kusaka again
-The Riot Troopers would make an earlier appearance
-Rina would be Mihara's replacement in the later episodes after the last battle between Dragon Orphenoch, Centipede Orphenoch, and Lobster Ophenoch
-Mr. J/Crocodile Orphenoch would says Chaco's name before dying
-Smart Lady would reveal her Orphenoch form in the final battle
-Mari would already be aware of Takumi becoming Faiz because she was instructed by Hanagata to find him because he was involved in protecting the kids from the Ryuusei Academy incident.
-The surviving kids would also find Takumi and reveal to him, Mari, and Keitarou that he was the mysterious Orphenoch that tried to save them from the Dragon Orphenoch.[/HIDE]

 

[cypsiman2]

Tensou Sentai Goseiger, some ideas I've been hammering out in my mind for a while now.

[HIDE]- In addition to Dr. Amachi, his friend Sakana and wife Yuko, who will be a geologist, will also be regulars, matching the sky-land-sea dynamic. Furthermore, they will be told the truth early on, once the Goseigers realize they can’t keep lying to their patrons.

- No Datas. The Goseigers are isolated from the Gosei World, which is frequently seen in flashbacks. Also, no Mystic Brother. Greater emphasis on the notion of the Goseiger’s power coming from loving the world and all that it has to offer.

- Greater conflict between the tribes, the greater part of which is not resolved until the climax of the Warstar Arc. Prejudices and stereotypes get torn down and discarded.

- Greater focus on Hyde’s grief over Magis, Gosei Great is redesigned to be plainly missing Gosei Green’s mech, a crab. Gosei Crab can not be summoned until Hyde has accepted his loss.

- Emphasis shall be made of Warstar’s military approach, targeting multiple key locations simultaneously in any given attack. A clear commander-subbordinate structure will be observed.

- The Bibi Bugs work off a principle similar to the True Poison of Gekiranger, killing the subject’s death and restoring them to greater vitality, hence giant size. However, the poison will run its course, killing the subject for good and destroying their soul forever. This does not become apparent until Mons Drake uses the Bibi Bugs on himself.

- Dereputa survives his battle because of the wound he gave to Alata in the first episode, the mark of the predator/prey relationship that can only end when one kills the other.

- Burajira is the one who unleashes the Yumaju, using the Invedar’s power to break the seal under the disguise of a malfunction during the final Warstar battle.

- GoseiKnight achieved his human form by having his headder conciousness joined by the soul of Magis. However, Knight refuses to listen to Magis, an angel who fell in the line of duty unlike his former master.

- Greater emphasis is placed on GoseiKnight’s ecoterrorism and the fact that humanity as a whole is still implicit in the harm done to the planet, even if individuals or groups of individuals try to undo those harms.

- The Yumaju are all friends and comrades, having all known each other, save for Burajira’s disguise of the Chupacabra. Each defeat of a Yumaju is met with proclamations of revenge.

- During the Matrintis arc, bits and pieces of Robogog’s backstory are revealed, rather than everything being dropped in one big info dump.

- GoseiKnight is captured and studied by the Matrintis, who separate Magis’s soul from him, storing it as data. He is eventually recovered, and while he can’t be restored to a living body, he can console his friends and family when they can return to the Gosei World.

- Also, Alata and Eri get together, because I think they would be cute together.[/HIDE]