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How would you make all these stories and their characters perfect?
- Ryuki
- Faiz
- Blade
- Hibiki
- Kabuto
- Den-O
- Kiva
- W
- OOO
- Ryuki
- Faiz
- Blade
- Hibiki
- Kabuto
- Den-O
- Kiva
- W
- OOO
Ryuki: Make the dialogue more consistent. Don't make Kanzaki a mystery. Have him actually do more so that there's more behind the scenes to support the backstory of the Rider Fight. Don't make Kitaoka comedic. Cut out Odin, Alternative, and Imperer. Keep Raia around a bit longer. Let the finale be all Ren's doing, not Kanzaki's. And give Yui more of a role.
Kabuto: Like Black Fang said, make Drake and Sasword relevant to the story. Give Jiya a bigger role. Cut out Punch Hopper, Kick Hopper, and Dark Kabuto. Introduce the Worm Leader much much sooner. Cut out Renge. Kill Kageyama off and let Yaguruma return as TheBee again, with no issues towards Tendou. And have Tendou be a bit nicer. :laugh:
Removing Alternative and Kanzaki's mystery would hinder the impact of the Game's purpose on Shinji. He's been trying all this time to stop it and save the Riders and innocents from the Monsters, and then he finds out that doing so means letting Yui die. The rest of the show is about how Shinji tries to decide what to do but ultimately can't because he's an idealist who wants to save everyone. Unless you mean keeping the Kagawa-Toujou plotline but getting rid of Alternative itself. I guess that could work just as well.
Kitaoka only became more comedic once Megumi showed up.
That could work too instead of having a Hopper. Maybe Yaguruma could work as a rogue against ZECT while Tendou, Daisuke and Tsurugi work together.