Mind Warriors: Toku at its best

[Sentairanger]

Welcome to the Central Mind Station this is a toku Fanfic I invented its a cross between SupeSentai,Kamen rider 555,X-men and others

Characters:

NickName: ULTIMITE KNIGHT KATSU
Age: 15
Power: Unkown
Color: Green
Henshin type: Card Step,Card Swipe

NickName: Lady Kamen
Age: 22
Power: Traping souls into cards
Color: Pink
henshin type: Fly,Card hold, Soul trap

NickName: Captin HISHI
Age: 34
Power: Makes objects with mind in midair useing object cards
color: Green
Henshin type: Unknown

Discription of show:
Well I made 3 Japanise People have Powers which they use cards to unlock there power they have belts that they program to change the mind warriors into there Battle forms

(Still working on Episdoe 1)

 

[Anshuman]

My first advice for you: Punctuation and return key.

However, I won't make any other comments or criticism until you post a part of the story up. =)

 

[Sentairanger]

Episode 1: Cardz

Episode 1: CardZ

3 Japanise People have Powers which they use cards to unlock there power they have belts that they program to change the mind warriors into there Battle forms
"shhhh! We don't want lady kamen to hear us" said ultimate knight
"I suggest you get out of my room before I use my Magic Card!" said lady kamen
Ultimate Kinght as been trying to take a Card that lady kamen has. The card is what makes lady kamen use her power and become a mind warrior...
"Well fine then, I'll get the card! I will" said Ultimate Knight
"Mind Warriors Please report to the docking bay for mission gadjets" said cpt.HISHI
The two rival mind warriors walked into the huge Docking bay to get the weapons and the other things he had wanted
"Ok Please Come with me" said Cpt. HISHI
"What is it this time tokyo is under attack?" Said Lady Kamen
"Nope, Osaka, The attacker is Juan-Pire" Said Cpt. HISHI
"Really? Juan-pire whats his power?" Said Ultimate Knight
"Well he can make towers come to life" Said Kimiko
Kimiko was always a shy girl only in the sixth grade with the mentality of a adult Kimiko was a Mind Warrior in training...
"Hi Kimi-chan!" Said Lady Kamen
Just then a huge table full of weapons & Gadgets came out
"Ok, Cpt.Hishi for you we have a 50 deck of OBJECTcards for Ultimate Knight we have A SwordCard and for you Lady Kamen a 12 pack of Soul Cards!" Said Kimiko
"WARRIORS PLEASE EXIT THE STATION"
"Kimiko go and fight with the Warriors" Said CPT.HISHI

[Not Done]