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He gave you a honest opinion. And I feel some very valid opinions at that and in no way insulting, and some good advice to boot. Your friend like it and that's fine, not every one is going to have the same opinion as your friend. In fact when you ask for people to review you story you should be prepared for some negative responses, especially when you go out of your way to ask people you don't even know to review you story. In fact your response to that honest opinions may cause other people to not review your story in the future. So it's alright to not necessarily like everything anybody says about your story but if it's honest you have to respect it.