Constructive Criticism?

Shogun_Master

Why is every good TV show Cancelled
Ok, first off, I'd like to apologize for not finishing episode eleven in the past month- I had been trying to participate in a November writing contest, so all other projects were pushed aside momentarily.

Now, the main point- Anyone who has read my fanfic, do you guys have any comments on it? Constructive critisism? Anything at all? Please post here so I can improve my writing over time.

Thank you.
 
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