For the lulz.
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- Aug 17, 2010
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I know it seems a little early for this but given the massive amount of spoilers before and after the premiere, it kinda came together pretty fast.
Prologue
[Deep within the ruins of the art museum shortly after the bombing.]
"Uhhhh.... Oh crap, what happened here?"
A mass of core and cell medals rise and take on the shape of the Canine Greed. At this point, all he is is a jackal's head on an incomplete body. He looks down at his hands, in shock.
"Oh no, oh no, this is not happening. This cannot be happening! That explosion must have knocked the rest of my medals away from me!"
He begins tearing through the rubble, frantically.
"Come on, they have to be here somewhere! Medals don't just fly away. Granted, they can roll, but that's not the point here!"
[Outside]
A young man on a moped stops and examines the wreckage.
"Aww, I really liked this place. I know it didn't get too many visitors but that doesn't mean you can destroy it without telling anyone!"
His eye spots something gleaming in the rubble. He reaches down and picks up two incomplete cell medals. [The inside has gained color, but the outside is still silver.]
"Wow, these things are kinda nice. [Smirks for a bit] Hello, do these belong to anyone?"
His reply is met with silence.
"Guess that's a no. After all, they must not cost much seeing as someone blew up a building with them still in it. But I don't want to be a thief though."
He reaches into his pocket and takes out 2000 yen.
"I'm leaving these here as payment!"
He gets back onto the moped and looks down at the two brown medals in his hand.
"I think my luck's finally turning around."
[Inside]
Thinking: Okay, calm down. Remember what they taught you: Just focus on your medals hard enough and you should be able to find them.
He stops and concentrates. Oh crap, they're moving!
He runs outside only to see the guy on the moped driving off.
"Wait! Those are mine!"
He didn't hear anything over the bike.
Well, I'm pretty much screwed: No medals, none of the other Greed are around, and the one shot I had is driving away. Wait. What's that fluttering noise?
He looks up and sees a flock of Candroids heading towards the building.
"Oh. That cannot be good."
To be continued. Critiques, comments, and suggestions greatly appreciated.
Character profiles with next update.
Prologue
[Deep within the ruins of the art museum shortly after the bombing.]
"Uhhhh.... Oh crap, what happened here?"
A mass of core and cell medals rise and take on the shape of the Canine Greed. At this point, all he is is a jackal's head on an incomplete body. He looks down at his hands, in shock.
"Oh no, oh no, this is not happening. This cannot be happening! That explosion must have knocked the rest of my medals away from me!"
He begins tearing through the rubble, frantically.
"Come on, they have to be here somewhere! Medals don't just fly away. Granted, they can roll, but that's not the point here!"
[Outside]
A young man on a moped stops and examines the wreckage.
"Aww, I really liked this place. I know it didn't get too many visitors but that doesn't mean you can destroy it without telling anyone!"
His eye spots something gleaming in the rubble. He reaches down and picks up two incomplete cell medals. [The inside has gained color, but the outside is still silver.]
"Wow, these things are kinda nice. [Smirks for a bit] Hello, do these belong to anyone?"
His reply is met with silence.
"Guess that's a no. After all, they must not cost much seeing as someone blew up a building with them still in it. But I don't want to be a thief though."
He reaches into his pocket and takes out 2000 yen.
"I'm leaving these here as payment!"
He gets back onto the moped and looks down at the two brown medals in his hand.
"I think my luck's finally turning around."
[Inside]
Thinking: Okay, calm down. Remember what they taught you: Just focus on your medals hard enough and you should be able to find them.
He stops and concentrates. Oh crap, they're moving!
He runs outside only to see the guy on the moped driving off.
"Wait! Those are mine!"
He didn't hear anything over the bike.
Well, I'm pretty much screwed: No medals, none of the other Greed are around, and the one shot I had is driving away. Wait. What's that fluttering noise?
He looks up and sees a flock of Candroids heading towards the building.
"Oh. That cannot be good."
To be continued. Critiques, comments, and suggestions greatly appreciated.
Character profiles with next update.