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Simple......Lose the 1980's story and focus more on the 2008's story. Make the 1980's story the prequel of Kiva and give Wataru and Taiga new girlfriends in the final episode.
[/HIDE]Here's a list I have in mind for Kiva.
1. Change the characters:
- Change his personality and make Wataru already knowing of his bloodline. And Kiva's form act like Wataru's half-breed form. Instead of when Wataru goes into his fangire nature, Bishop would find a way to unleash Wataru's full fangire potential which results him to have a fangire form. NOT the flight style. Also... after gaining the zanvat sword... he shouldn't use it while just as emperor form, but also as the sealed Kiva as his personal weapon.
- Shizuka: Turn her into a witch as one of Wataru's allies. She and her kind could be the ones making fuestles for the past few Kivas.
- Megumi: I like her. But make her discover she is a half breed and that her father is Jiro. Her other father would be her stepfather and that he kept in secret from her. Have her the first person to know Kiva's identity as Wataru and that she'll keep it secret.
- Nago: Make him the last person to know Kiva's identity. When the organization finally captures Wataru, he unmasks him leaving himself shocked and hurt by his lies. In their final fight, Megumi tries to save Wataru's wrath. After that, Nago gains a forgiving heart and both him and Wataru work together.
- Arms Monsters: Have Wataru interact with the monsters when he decides to visit Castle Doran to see them and ask for advice.
I don't know about Yuri and Otoya. I do would love for Otoya to become Dark Kiva. Perhaps Otoya can leave journals for Wataru about his past and how he came across the fangires and many monsters that had conflicts with them.
2. Story:
- Explain how the fuestles came to be.
- How the Kiva bloodline came to be when it came to Otoya's after the original King of the Fangires.
3. Arsenal:
- Make Wataru's motorcycle change to normal, but when as Kiva it changes.
- Use the Buroon Booster more as his battle cruiser after it was debuted.
- Skip the dramatic transformations after Wataru gains them in their first debuts.
- Fuestles: The Arms Monsters. Instead of the same 3 that are "fake" and "sealed". Why not have various arms monsters for every one of the riders. Dark Kiva should have only one "sealed" fuestle that is used to seal arms monsters.
4. Characters that should be added.
Knight: Make him one of Kiva's ally. Like Kiba from 555, he's the second monster to fight as a good guy. His fangire form... it should be something from the lizard class or another beast class fangire. Perhaps a gazelle.
Pawns: Fangire combatmen that are the Fangire's victims turned to minions. They would look like fruit bats.
Anybody else got ideas for rewriting Kiva?
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Wow, this actually sounds better. I like the change that Megumi is half-werewolf.
I like your idea of adding Knight.
For my own fanfiction, I have a female character, whose originality is a member of Sagark's tribe. Sagark tribe has been serving Fangire tribe for many generations, and the best Sagark warrior will be chosen and tested to gain the rank of Knight. Amira, one of Taiga's friend from middle school, is trained to be a Knight and act as one of Taiga's secretary.
Amira can henshin into Kamen Rider Saga. Yup, I want a female rider in Kiva, and Saga design looks 'female' enough (for me) to be one. Last but not least, she definitely falls for Taiga so there are two love triangles: Amira - Taiga - Mio, and Wataru - Mio - Taiga.
Because Knight has taken the mantle of Saga, Taiga definitely need a new Kamen Rider treatment so I give him another Kivat. Let just say we have a twins of Kivat lol.
Knight: Make him one of Kiva's ally. Like Kiba from 555, he's the second monster to fight as a good guy. His fangire form... it should be something from the lizard class or another beast class fangire. Perhaps a gazelle.
Pawns: Fangire combatmen that are the Fangire's victims turned to minions. They would look like fruit bats.
Change the names of the weapons:
Garulu saver -> wolfen saber
Basshaa magnum -> merman magnum
Dogga hammer -> Frankenstein hammer
Most obvious change would be limiting Emperor Form instead of Wataru using it in every episode. Way too much spamming of that form. Everything else is fine really, I enjoyed the 1980s story overlapping with the 2008 story. If we took that out, the 2008 story would be lacking. I also would of had Megumi and Nago love interest hinting a lot earlier. Maybe Wataru having a girlfriend at the end. Some more bats and horror action.